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Post by ßøn∑z Mon Apr 25, 2011 10:44 pm

Wanna join again Alyson? Very Happy

Bekka: "You have a day to live, give or take," the doctor said from the edge of my bed.
He glanced at his sheet, "I'd say tonight, when the medicine wears off, Bekka, you'll pass. I'm dearly sorry, but your heart has suffered too much trauma . . . Who would you like to see?"
My parents? No.
"Ally," I say weakly.
I am so shaken. I cannot believe this.
I will not die. I can't do that to Ally, I can't loose my life. I'm 17.
And, and . . . Jonas.
"And Jonas . . . If he . . . Showed up," I add.
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Post by Guest Mon Apr 25, 2011 10:46 pm

i don't think i joined at all, but i can if you want...

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Post by ßøn∑z Mon Apr 25, 2011 10:46 pm

Sure xD
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Post by Guest Mon Apr 25, 2011 10:48 pm

okay Smile

girl or boy?

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Post by ßøn∑z Mon Apr 25, 2011 10:50 pm

Whichever, lol
The format is under old mature archives
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Post by Black&White Mon Apr 25, 2011 10:51 pm

Ally
I step in, my eyes red from crying. "Bekka..." I go over to her bed quickly. "Bekka, I'm sorry. I'm sorry..."
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Post by ßøn∑z Mon Apr 25, 2011 10:53 pm

Bekka: I feel odd. Numb, all over. Nothing.
I don't even understand what happened. No one has told me.
Like I'm already dead, I suppose.
"Not your fault, Ally, not at all," I look up at her and start to cry.
Cry is an understatement. I start to sob, my whole body shuddering and face streaked with new tears.
"A-Ally . . . . I'm scared. I don't want to die."
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Post by Guest Mon Apr 25, 2011 10:55 pm

okay Smile

Name: Amber Drew
Age: 18
Status: cheerleader, volleyball and lacrosse captain
Appearence: 7 Minutes In Heaven - Page 7 Britt610 ---curvy, hair is a little more brown
Personality: smart, cunning, sarcastic, likes to experiment with who she dates
Clique (The popular kids, the rich, etc.): popular/rich

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Post by Black&White Mon Apr 25, 2011 11:00 pm

Ally
I look upon her helpless but even so I have to stay strong for her. I get into the bed with her again, gently pulling her into my lap. I put my arms around her softly, not wanting to hurt her. Not wanting to cause her more pain. And I let her cry, because there's nothing I can do. Hopeless, damn it! I hate feeling hopeless. "You won't die...you won't," I coo to her softly, brushing back her soft blond locks. How I love her curls... You can't die, Bekka....don't die...
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Post by Guest Mon Apr 25, 2011 11:01 pm

how should Amber enter?

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Post by ßøn∑z Tue Apr 26, 2011 7:40 pm

Hmm, I don't have any free charries. Do you, BW?

Bekka: "Don't say that Ally!" I frooze under her touch, because this was the last time I'd ever feel her soft fingers on my skin.
"I'm going to die, Ally, OK? Denying it only hurts more."
I sob and burry my head in my hands.
"I want to die on your arms, Ally. I love you. I'm 17, and I'm a lesbian, and I'm going to die, and I . . Love you."
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Post by Black&White Tue Apr 26, 2011 7:57 pm

Ally
I lean over and gently take her hands from her face, lacing my fingers with hers. "I love you too, Bekka. Nothing is ever going to change that." I kiss her silently, deeply yet gently. "I'll stay. As long as you need me I'll be here to help. Promise," i whisper against her lips.
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Post by Black&White Tue Apr 26, 2011 7:57 pm

nope
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Post by Guest Tue Apr 26, 2011 8:15 pm

so should i just have her walking around aimlessly and run into one of your characters or set of characters?


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Post by Guest Tue Apr 26, 2011 9:14 pm

Jen: Pressed so close, I didn't like the feel of my bra still between us. He'd unclasped it, so I just shrugged it off the rest of the way. "You've got me...do what you want with me," I purred.

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Post by Guest Fri Apr 29, 2011 9:21 pm

Should I bring in Jonas now?

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Post by ßøn∑z Sat Apr 30, 2011 10:01 am

(Ende: Yes!)
(Alyson: Maybe ask Spired or Ende if they have any open charries?)

Bekka: "Not long then, I suppose," my voice breaks and I let out a croaky sob.
The weirdest sensation is traveling through me right now. Something mixed with numbness and relaxation. I am not dying. Just . . . shutting down, maybe.
I can't help but kiss her back. Nothing intense or passionate, but something gentle and sorrowful.

Rome: I can't even answer, but my hands do for me. I rolled Jen onto her back, my hands pushing against her bare chest.
God, I love women.
I'm hoping that no one can see as I start to pull down my shorts with my feet, not an easy thing to do, and nuzzle my nose and mouth against her chest, breathing out slowly.
"I plan to do just that," I growl, kissing her neck deeply.
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Post by Guest Sat Apr 30, 2011 10:46 am

I'll bring him in Monday, I'm just waiting for my friend to get to my house, then I'm off for the weekend

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Post by ßøn∑z Sat Apr 30, 2011 11:01 am

OK!
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Post by Guest Sat Apr 30, 2011 12:05 pm

spire and ende, do you have any open charries?

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Post by Black&White Sat Apr 30, 2011 12:13 pm

Ally
"I'll treasure every second," i murmur. Couldn't they just replace her heart? There are donors all over this effing place, dying right now like her. Can't they do something with their life to help another? To help me?
So selfish. But I don't want to lose my best friend, the girl I love and have loved for a long time.
I never was religious. Despite the weirdness of it, of the request, i /pray/ someone will die for her. Sometime within this day. I do not want it to be my last with her.
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Post by Guest Sat Apr 30, 2011 12:44 pm

Amber: I walked the halls of the hospital, searching for the room that my mother was in, hoping, just hoping that I will make it in time before she passes. Every corner I turn I can tell I'm getting closer.

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Post by ßøn∑z Sat Apr 30, 2011 12:58 pm

(Actually the country I'm from, Canada, has a huge shortage of heart donors and I read an article about the awful waiting lists xD So, that's why she doesn't get a heart)

Bekka: A nurse pokes her head around to see us kissing and looks a bit pale as she steps closer.
"Um."
I break apart quickly and stare at her blankly.
"Visiting hours are almost over. Bekka's had a long day, and . . . "
"It's my last day," I coldly state.
The nurse narrows orange eyebrows, "Visiting hours are over."
I shake my head. "I honestly don't give a fuck. I'm dying today."
Then the nurse gets the message and hurries out. Wow. Probably to gossip to all the other old bags here.
I realize I miss school, me and Ally always so popular and cool. Fussing over hair and clothes and make-up . . . .
"Ally, who will miss me, when I'm gone?"
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Post by Guest Sat Apr 30, 2011 1:02 pm

Amber: I burst into a room and see two girls (Ally and Bekka). "Sorry."

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Post by Black&White Sat Apr 30, 2011 2:00 pm

yeah i know, just Ally thinking

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I manage a small smile when the nurse leaves. Never mess with Bekka when she's pissed. A few have to learn that the hard way. I look down at her. "Everyone," i say softly, and i fully believe it. She was such a talkative and friendly person, i think everyone at the school at least knew of her. "All of our friends, at school and at work. My parents, my brother..." God, my brother... four years younger than us and he still tried to ask her out.
I look up at the girl, hoping she didn't get the same treatment as the nurse. "That's fine..." I say quietly to her.
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