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Post by Guest Sat Sep 03, 2011 1:19 am

"In Mirissa's world it is a perfect utopia, except for the fact that anyone who opposes the society is thrown in a dark jail cell miles underground. The exits are guarded perfectly and the prisoners tortured to the point of breaking. My charrie Mirissa has been this place since she was five, when the tattoo appeared on her neck and face setting her apart form the others. Oh, I forgot to mention that half the people here are here because they have some kind of ability and the society doesn't want them around. A prophecy has been made about Mirissa but most don't believe in it. She is spose to save them all, the ones who help her will have a mark on the back of their necks. A small triangle with lines swirling out from a rose and thorns along the lines.

I want to flesh out this idea so it is easier to write, since this will become a book please tell me if I can use your charrie. Thanks, lets start the rebellion.

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Name: Mirissa
Age: 16
Gender: female
Appearance: shabbily cut red hair that sits above her pale skin at her ears. She has scars all over her body and is too skinny to be healthy. has Blue eyes stemming off a black center, look very strange.
Power: She can talk to, control the darkness around her. Make it a solid living thing. She can also control minds later on but not now.
Anything extra: She is basically blind in the light, only can see when its dark. In the light she can make out movement but nothing else.
Marked or not: Marked, she is the main marked one. Her tattoo has the main triangle but has vines stemming out of it that runs up her face and around her eyes. The vines are covered with thorns and two roses sit on the sides of her neck."

~Bells

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Post by Bells Sat Sep 03, 2011 2:06 am

Name: Dani
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance: She has short, very cur
ly blonde hair to.her chin. Her skin is a milky white color and her eyes Icy blue. Dani is short and small, could easily be mistaken for someone younger. Normally has around eight daggers on her person.
Power: Nothing for now, in the future...well you will see won't you... Twisted Evil
Anything extra: She is Seph's daughter, the elder one. Has been abused and taught that torture is a perfectly normal thing to do. Lives in her own room in the prison.
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Name: Jake
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance: Just like Mirissa only a little better fed, and his eyes are a normal blue. Also add the maleness.
Power: None...maybe...I've considered giving him astro projection.
Anything extra: Mirssa's twin brother who is a guard.
Marked oR not: Not


Name: Shikiro
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Appearance: Dark raven colored hair, runs past her shoulder's and is pulled into a messy pony tail with whatever she can find at the moment to tie it back. Average height but very underweight. Her skin has the remembrance of a tan she got over a year ago. Her eyes are an almost amber color.
Power: none.
Anything extra: She is the only daughter of one of the Rebel clan leaders. Her father has mysteriously disappeared after a raid on the rebel hideout, Shikiro and Derick were both caught and placed in the cells.
Marked oR not: marked

Name: Derick
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Appearance: Carmel brown colored hair, his eyes are a brown ish green, but not hazel. The brown is surrounded by a faint circle of green. He is around 5'11" and pretty buff. His skin is an olive tone.
Power: Maybe, if so it will be revealed.
Anything extra: He was an orphan taken in by Shikiro's father. Has watched over her like an older brother since she was a little toddler. Like Shikiro he was caught in the raid and has been here for a little over a year.
Marked oR not: not sure.


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Post by SelfProclaimedHeroine Sat Sep 03, 2011 3:28 am

Name: Lance
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Appearance: Cropped brown hair and crimson eyes, isvery tall. And has very sharp, angular features in his frame of his face and body.
Power: Can read people's minds and has some control of making people do what he wants with his mind.
Anything extra: He can be arrogant, but knows when to shut his mouth. ((XD))
Marked or not: Yes

Name: Ingrid
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance: Blonde hair with big brown eyes. She looks younger than she actually is, and is fairly short. She also has big brown fluffy cat ears on the top of her head. Her hair goes down to her shoulders.
Power: Can disguise herself as a cat of any kind. Ranging from a house cat to a big cat.
Anything extra: She stays fairly quiet, but she--like Lance--can stand up for herself. Her name is the same as her deceased grandmother.
Marked or not: Yes
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Post by Guest Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:51 am

Name: Sepheroth Fearstare
Age: Mid 30s
Gender: Male
Appearance: Stands at about 6'3" with ferice blue eyes and light skin. His skin isn't as pale as most of the people in the prison, because he is one of the very few that actually manage to leave the prison. His attire really just depends on what he is doing, but for the most part he is dressed in fine leather plating as if he was wearing a strange form of gaurd outfit from the darkages. His features are very sharp and he's thin, but very muscled. His body is covered in scars that came from both war and his prisoners. One of the most prominent scars streaches from his temple, down across the corner of his right eye and into the middle of his cheek. He does infact have glasses, but he hardly ever uses them unless he is reading or experimenting. His hair is salt and peppered and is cropped short so as to not give the prisoners any advantages over him. He also wears dark black leather boots, the heel of which is always covered in blood.
Power: No power
Anything extra: He rules the prison
Marked or not: psh no


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Post by Guest Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:59 am

Name: Ferran Terrison
Age: early 20s (no specific age has been determined yet)
Gender: Female
Appearance:D.O.D.                              Female-character
Power: no power
Anything extra: She's Sepheroth's right hand girl, but he doesn't trust her to run the prison because she likes to torture the prisoners to much. He's afraid that if he lets her have free rain, they will all be dead by the time he gets back.
Marked or not: nope


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Post by Guest Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:38 am

Name: Jamison Riley
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Appearance:D.O.D.                              Kd0unl
Power: He controls earth aka earth bender
Anything extra: He's best friends with Kale Tennison, both of which are in cahoots with the resistance and both of which have gotten caught by no choice of their own. Don't ask Jamison about it, he's very touchy about the subject and goes off on it for hours.
Marked or not: yes, unfortunately. He hates the mark it's...girly.


Name: Kale Tennison
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance: D.O.D.                              18eedffe21cf33bb95e61bb24000f0af5g
Power: Mind shields that block people as if there was a litteral, physical wall between him and whoever, and incredible strength, but even that has a limit. He just has yet to figure out what that limit is...
Anything extra: Kale is....cocky..but if you ask him he says he just has a lot of confidence. He's not so much cocky in his ability, but rather in his looks. He likes to mouth off to the gaurds and such, and finds himself to be rather funny. He is a big fan of food and, if given the chance, could pack away five tripple whopper meals and still have room for desert.
Marked or not: Unfortunately, yes. But he's not nearly as upset about it as Jamison. He actually likes to show it off.

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Post by Ale J. Wed Sep 07, 2011 12:19 am

Name: Tara
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance: Straight Strawberry Blonde hair to her shoulders, and Very dark Brown eyes, almost black if you look at them in certain lighting. She is very skinny, unhealthily skinny. Her skin is pale, and nearly no color at all in her cheeks. She almost never smiles.
Power: She is able to become invisible and can make herself...whats the word? Like a ghost, you can put your hand through her...transparent? But only if she makes herself like that.
Anything extra: She has fast reflexes and good listening as well. But she absolutely hates the dark, which doesn't work out for her very well....
Marked or not: Marked

Name: James
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance: Sandy blonde hair, shaggy and uncut. Blue eyes that are now washed out and tired looking. He tries his best to be optimistic, and tries to have a smile on his face- especially when guards come in.
Power: He can see things a second before it happens, is slightly stronger than most people, and can sense when something is approaching.
Anything extra: He knows how to fight, but can get distracted easily.
Marked or not: Marked

Name: Raina
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Appearance: Black curly hair down to her mid-back and grey eyes. She is always glaring at everyone in sight, never smiling and always pretty groughy and mean.
Power: She can put someone in a trance by looking into their eyes and see into their mind and soul, sometimes she doesnt mean to. She can almost always control her powers
Anything extra: She tries to use her powers as minimal as possible, the more she uses them, the more easy it is to not control it. The bad thing is, her powers could easily be used for evil. So she tries not to make it known to people
Marked or not: Not.



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Post by Regret Wed Sep 07, 2011 5:38 pm

Name: None. Known only as the Slender Man.
Age: Some years.
Gender: Male.
Appearance:
[img]D.O.D.                              Slende10[/img]
Power: Changes the length of his torso and/or limbs at will. Mentally convinces people to act against their will. Wipes memories. Possibly capable of dimensional shifting.
Anything extra: He is reputed to have performed some horrific acts. Huge numbers of murders, suicides and disappearances are attributed to his intervention, either directly or indirectly. He does not understand human morality very well.
Marked or not: Sometimes, and his mark is never the same twice. What's more, two people looking at him will see different marks.

Name: totheark, aka Masky, aka all sorts of other weird names. He'll tell you what to call him.
Age: Changes.
Gender: Generally male.
Appearance:
[img]D.O.D.                              Tothea10[/img]
By the way, that's totheark at his master's feet.
Power: None. (S)he has no idea who (s)he is or what (s)he is doing. (S)he is not necessarily the same person twice, but an extension of the Slender Man's will, forced to do his bidding. Totheark speaks and interacts with humans for the Slender Man, and also performs any tasks that the Slender Man feels are not important enough for him to attend personally.
Anything extra: "You will lead me... To the ark."
Marked or not: Never. The Slender Man never chooses a marked person to become totheark.
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Post by Momo13 Thu Sep 08, 2011 9:51 pm

Joining later....if that is ok bells?
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Post by Bells Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:01 pm

HI REGRET I HAVEN'T SEEN YOU IN LIKE EVER! SO LIKE...HI! Very Happy

I do have a question though about your characters. Could you perhaps take another look at the introduction and make your own charries? These two wouldn't fit in very well. Please and Thank you. Smile
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Post by Karma =) Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:27 pm

Name: Aria and Alley (twins)
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearance: D.O.D.                              K1011
Power: Aria has the power to mess with people's mind and make them see and believe things. Alley is a human shield she can turn off peoples powers at will and make shields out of thin air to block a bullet.
Anything extra: Aria and Alley's powers are more powerful when together. They balance each other out.
Marked or not: Both Marked
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Post by Momo13 Fri Sep 09, 2011 3:49 pm

Name: Kira
Age: 17
Gender: female
Appearance:
~Hair: Pin strait black hair that falls past her shoulders in layers. Long side bangs fall over her left eye. Light blonde streaks with purple tints color her hair.
~Eyes: Dark green eyes with blue specks. Mysterious glint in her eyes and they are usually hidden behind sunglasses.
~Body: She is averaged height with a flat chest. She looks boyish, and could pull off being a boy when her hair is pulled under a hood. Her limbs are long and slightly thin.
~skin: Light pale skin with a peachy undertone. Freckles around her nose and cheeks.
~tattoos/piercings: Black flames wrap around her wrists. Has a treble/bass clef heart on her left shoulder blade and a flying Chinese dragon type thing on her right. Tripple piercing in both ears, lip ring and nose stud. Cartilage piercing in her right ear. Bottom piercings in both ears are gauged.
Power: She is really really fast and strong. Like, The Flash fast.
Anything extra: looks pretty BA. you dont want to get on her bad side.
Marked or not: yuppers.

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Post by Bells Fri Sep 09, 2011 11:21 pm

Mirissa crushed herself up against the stone wall of her cell as her eyes locked ont the small ray of light entering the room from a small window on the top of the door. She glared at it for a moment, annoyance fingering her mind along with a bit of weariness. The window had been added yesterday. The chains around her wrists added the day before.

They were being more careful, rumors of the rebels being closer to the prison than ever before setting the prison on edge. The guards would whisper outside her doorway about how uneasy their boss had been.

Mirissa wrinkled her nose slightly, moving her clinched fists into her lap making the chains rattle. Daniella. Just the name made her lip curl in disgust. Another one of the results of this place, a girl so twisted she didn't see that anything could possibly be wrong with holding the freaks prisoner. Even children.

Shaking her head Mirissa sighed and went back to staring at the little window. That bit of light said it all to her. Things were changing. And for someone who had been here as long as she had, that was a bad thing. Because down here things could only get worse.
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Post by Bells Fri Sep 09, 2011 11:39 pm

Dani stalked out of the torture cell with a scowl on her lips. The small dagger in her hand was covered in dark red blood, her shirt was also touched by drops of the dark crimson.

"CAN SOMEONE PLEASE INFORM ME WHY," She paused and lowered her voice, to a deathly calm whisper. "Why, I had to come and deal with the freak myself?"

The two guards standing outside the cell eyed each other nervously, knowing that no matter the answer they would be punished for there lack of foresight in this case. The older of the two stepped forward, sweat beading his forehead just below locks of his shaggy raven colored hair.

"W-Well Miss Blake I- We-" He stammered and Dani rolled her eyes, her free hand going to a second dagger on her belt.

"Get it out. You what?"

"We did't spect fer the gurl to be such a good fighter Miss Blake. She surpised us all. That scrawy freak dun look like she could lick someone so good."

Dani's eyes narrowed as she clinched the hilt of the other dagger then paused, a cruel glint forming in her eyes. "Fine, since you caused me to be short a prisoner you shall take her place. I shall send someone in to take the body later, until then, " She gestured at a few of the other guards in the hall before starting in the direction of her office. "Enjoy your new quarters."

She smirked as the sounds of protest reached her ears seconds before a loud thud and the sound of two heavy forms being dragged into a near by cell. Oh how she loved her job.
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Post by Bells Fri Sep 09, 2011 11:53 pm

Jake smiled a little, closing his eyes and letting the small cries of pain wash over him. After a second he let his eyes drift back open as he drew the poker down the freaks body, its eyes lit up in fear and pain. His hand stung slightly from the heat of the poker, he'd stuck it in the fire to warm it before putting it to good use.

He didn't mind the heat though, it almost soothed him. The feeling of numbness that overcame him when he should have felt pain was excierating to him now. He could barely bring anything but a small feeling of smugness from the memory of the experiment upon him.

Only days ago he'd undergone on of the many tests beind done upon the guards, his being the only one of any sucess. It was freeing to be without the normal guilt that he would've felt when causing screams to escape the freaks lips, now all he felt was a need for more. So he grinned and let the poker cut deeper into its skin, after all, it was only a freak.

Why should he care about it? There was only one of them that was of any importance to him..but that didn't matter. He didn't plan on ever seeing her so..

Cutting off the thought he plunged the hot metal into the girl's side, the smile widening on his lips as she screamed.
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Post by Guest Sat Sep 10, 2011 1:57 am

Sepheroth was in his office, everything quiet for once. A large old book was sitting open infront of him, his fingers intertwined and resting against his chin as he peered through his glasses at the fine handwritten text. "There are pages missing," he finally concluded to himself as he stared between the pages, seeing the slight fringe of a ripped page. His anger slowly began to simmer beneath his cool countance, a tense silence hanging in the air. He needed those pages. They were cruicial to his plans. The only problem was, how do you find them and where?
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Ferran was cleaning her knife while sitting on the ground between a few cells. She blinked a few times before flicking her long hair back over her shoulder. Jake was just down the hall and she couldn't help feel jealous of him. Sir loved him best, even after she tried so hard to please him. At the same time, she couldn't help but admire Jake. He could at least use other methods of torture. Ferran couldn't. She had to use her knives. She loved her knives, but most of all she loved using other peoples knives against them. If it wasn't for the knives, she wouldn't be able to torture anyone. Well...it was possible she could...she just hated doing anything else unless she was absolutely forced to. Like with that one girl that reads minds or whatever. If it wasn't for the L.T.M.B. (little thingy ma-bobber) that attaches to her temple, she probably wouldn't be able to torture the girl at all.
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"I can't believe," Jamison let his words trail off as he shook his head. "How could Seth be so ******* stupid? I mean, honestly! It doesn't take a genious to figure out how to not get caught by gaurds when there is a frikin tree not even five feet from you!" He shook his head, in disbelief and anger as he sat outside the prison with his best friend and long time companion Kale.
"Do you got any food?" Kale asked, totally blowing off what Jamison had been saying for the last half hour. He couldn't help it though, Jamison had a tendancy to...over do the ranting.
"Food? How in the hell can you think of food right now?" Jamison asked incredulously.
Kale shrugged. "I'm hungry," he said as if that should be the one and only answer, not to mention it being an "un-duh" answer.
"Just shut up fatass."
"Me? You're the one that's been ranting for the last half an hour over Seth! Of all the people to rant about, you chose Seth. Come on dude."
Jamison blinked and stared at Kale. Kale did have a point...."Let's just find the Daughter of Darkness and get out of here alright?"
"That's what I've been trying to tell you for the last half hour!" Kale exclaimed exasperated.
"Keep your voice down dipstick! They'll hear us!"

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Post by Bells Sat Sep 10, 2011 8:02 pm

Shikiro pulled herself a bit higher in the tree, her eyes searching the forest floor beneath her.

Shirkiro!" Derick called from across the clearing, squinting his eyes to try and see her better against the glare of the evening sun. "Get away from there! We should head back..."

Shikiro rolled her eyes and climbed further into the tree, straining to see the large gate in the distance, beyond the edge of the trees.
Shirkiro come o-"
"Do you think we can see them from here?" She wondered aloud, trying even harder to make out the blury shape.

"If we can see them they can see u-," He began and broke off as she grabbed a branch above her head and used it to swing herself into a different tree. "Shikiro! Be careful!"

Rolling her eyes once again she steadied herself and climbed even higher. "I can see it.."
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Post by Karma =) Sun Sep 11, 2011 9:48 pm

Aria: I wake up shaking next to my sister. Great the nightmares are back. The same nightmare comes everynight. My mother and father screaming at the people who are taking us, fighting to get us back to them then a man in a dark hood, his face is blocked from me, comes and shoots them each in the head with one single horrible gun. I curl up in a ball trying to fight off the nightmare that would never leave me alone. Alley wakes up and looks over at me frowning, "The dream again?"
I nod and she takes me into her arms comforting me. She is the only one I would ever let see me weak like this.

Alley: I hold Aria while she cries. I hate seeing her this way but I can't block her from herself. Her concionous is the one that keeps replaying that terrible day. I never tell Aria but that day is never to far from my mind and niether is the guy who killed them cold blooded. If I ever find him he will suffer and that is a promise I will die trying to keep but first I have to survive the day in this hell hole and add to that I have to make sure Aria doesn't do something stupid like piss off a gaurd again.
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Post by Guest Tue Sep 13, 2011 11:18 am

"It's a good thing you're not fat or anything," Kale grumbled a few hours later as he lifted Jamison up, letting him stand on his shoulders. Jamison reached up, pulling himself up on the small ledge of a window. "Hey," he said to the figure inside it. "What's your name?" He was totally ignoring Kale who was still complaining about Jamison's weight.

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Post by Bells Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:47 pm

Mirissa's eyes got hug and she let out a startled squeak as she jumped leaped away from the window. "Freaking hell!" She exclaimed, narrowing her eyes in an attempt to see. "Better question, who're you?"
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Post by Guest Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:58 pm

"I think I asked you first," Jamison said with a grin. "Keep it down or the gaurds will hear us and I'll be in there with you." He looked her over, or at least what he could see that wasn't in the shadows. "You the girl they say is Darkness's daughter?"

Kale: "FATASS!" he said through a grunt

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Post by Bells Tue Sep 13, 2011 1:02 pm

She glared at him, sitting back down and pulling her legs up to her chest. "Why do you want to know?" She demanded, lowering her voice a little. She wasn't dumb.
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Post by Guest Tue Sep 13, 2011 1:10 pm

Jamison looked at her and raised his brow. "Well, I was sent by the rebelion to break you out if you are." He shrugged slightly. "But if you don't want to get out I guess I could go." He started to duck down off the window ledge, Kale thinking he was finally going to get a break.

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Post by Momo13 Tue Sep 13, 2011 3:23 pm

Kira sat in the back of her cell fiddling with her lip ring. Her eyes were vacent of all emotion. She couldnt beleive she let herself get caught! It was such a stupid mistake she made as well. Her fist lashed out and she dented the wall behind her, bits of stone crumbling off. normally that would injur someone, and bruise and break their hand. but for her it just got her anger out.

(erm....if i need to change anything just tell me bells....I didnt really know how to come in.)
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Post by Bells Tue Sep 13, 2011 4:31 pm

(Its good. Smile ))

Mirissa hesitated, biting her lip as she tried again to see out the window, too much light. She couldn't do it. "Wait," she offered, then paused her eyes flashing to the nosies coming from behind her cell door. "I'm her."
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