A New Ending

Nathanial: I ran after him, realizing it was too late.

Lilian: I knelt beside Lilian.

i meant alison XD

Alison: I looked up and saw Nathanial. "We are done.." I said quietly. "Im leaving." I went ot back up my bags.

Ben: I turned and said "This is all because of you." I said to Nathanial.

((BURN! lol))

Nathanial: I glared at him and didn't move.

Lilian: I stood up with help from Ben.

Alison: I packed my bag and hit nathanial in the face. "How dare you!" I said with tears in my eyes. I turned and thanked ben and smiled sadly at Lilian.

Ben: I looked at Nathanial. "You need to go now." I asaid quietly. I lead my wife down the steps and we started to leave Nathanial.

((Aw poor alison jerk nathanial..)

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Lilian: I walked with Ben down the steps.

Nathanial: I slammed the door behind them.

Ben: I turned and yelled at Nathanial. "She desevers better!"

Alison: I looked down and I forgot my slip. I sighed and went back. I took the key out of my bag and opened the door. Nathanial was no where. I went up to the room and found my slip and I turned to leave.

(now what?)

(Nathanial should try to get Alison to forgive him... and her mother comes and tells her that the duke has asked for her hand and Alison is torn...)

(HAHAHAHA lol sorry xD)

(okay)

Alison: I turned and saw Nathanial by the door. I looked down tears falling. "Why?" I asked quietly.

Nathanial: I shrugged and walked up to her. "It was a mistake. I'm sorry."

Alison: "Dont touch me..." I said looking at him. "I am pregnant with your child! And you want to fool around with another woman."

Nathanial: "I'm sorry." Was all I could say, I knew she wouldn't ever forgive me, but all I could do was try.

Alison: I looked at him he was close to me. "Tell me when." I said looking into his deep eyes with my icy eyes.

(what?)

(She is asking when did he cheat.)

(oh)

Nathanial: "Before I knew you were pregnant."

Alison: I looked at him and said "Why... tell me why..." I said looking at him.

Nathanial: "I had had too much to drink...I...I'm not used to commitment like this..."

Alison: "Then why did you ask me to be yours? Was it spear of the moment?" I asked angerly.

Nathanial: I shook my head. "No, I really thought I could be committed to you, and I'm am so sorry."

Alison: "I will give you another chance.. Do you think you can be faithful? Because if you cant... I will marry the duke and say that this is his child." I said putting a hand on my stomache.

Nathanial: "I promise you with all my heart, Alison *insert last name here*, that I will be yours and only yours."