A New Ending

Set in the 1770's after the Revolutionary War in America. Soldiers are comming home to England defeated and others in America are celebrating. Choose a side and see what happens

Name:
Gender:
English/American:
Age:
Looks:
Personallity:

Name:Alison
Gender:Female
English/American:English
Age:16
Looks:Long brown hair and blue eyes
Personallity:rebelious, she doesnt follow her mother and father's orders and she is betrothed to a Duke but she wants love not riches

bump!

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Name: Nathanial
Gender: Male
English/American: English
Age: 20
Looks:
Personality: kind, mysterious, rebellious (loves to go against the rules), loves things he can't have...

(haha hhheeeyyy sorry xD xD u wanna start?)

(sure:))

(haha yay)

Alison: I stood on the dock wishing I could get on the boat with my dad to America. It has been 1 month after the war. I sighed and waved him off.

Nathanial: I set above the dock, on ground level, and watched as various people came and went. I watched the faces of the soldiers and saw them full of defeat. I saw the faces of family members over come with joy that their son or father was now home and safe.

Alison: My blue pettycoat flew around my thin body. My father got me this dress from America it was my favortie. I looked out as my father's ship got smaller and smaller. I felt tears comming down my cheeks.

Nathanial: Watching people got boring, so I hopped down from my perch and walked down to the dock and leaned against the stone wall that was England's fortress.

Alison: I turned away and walked fast towards home. Maybe I could go un noticed that I am the daughter of the so called 'Tratior of England' I thought.

Nathanial: I saw Alison and ran after her. I managed to catch up to her and stop in front of her with a sly smirk on my face. "Hello, miss." I said with a bow.

Alison: I bowed back. "Good morning mister." I said trying to hide the distaste out of my voice.

Nathanial: I smiled. "What is that I hear in your beautiful voice?"

Alison: I gave my innocent smie. "What do you hear? Tis nothing but satifasction that one such as your self came and are speaking to a girl like me." I said

Nathanial: I chuckled. "Well, that is quite a pleasant thing to hear from such a beautiful girl like you."

Alison: "Well the pleasure is all mine. Why is a man such as your self talking to me?" I asked trying not to show him my discomfort.

Nathanial: "I saw you down at the dock and could not help myself. I wanted to come talk to you, get to know you."

Alison: I couldnt help but twist my face in distaste. "Oh.. Well I must be thanking you then for presenting me with your ..fine presents."

Nathanial: I could sense her displeasure and it only made me want her more, but I decided to let her go. "Well it was a pleasure meeting you miss." I said and kissed her hand as I bowed and then walked away.

Alison: I turned and watched him go. Maybe I should be so rude to him. He is very dashing. I thougt.

~ FAST FOWARD NIGHT TIME~ (Lol always wanted to do tht)

Alison: I tossed and turned in my bed. I couldnt sleep. I quickly put on a satin white robe and some shoes and snuck outside. The cold sea air cleared my head.

haha (it's fun to have control like that isn't it )

Nathanial: I roamed the streets and ended up by the water, the one place that calmed my nerves. I watched as the waves danced in the moonlight.

(haha yyeeesss it is xD)

Alison: I walked around the dark streets and went to the shore. I could feel the waves and went to put my feet in. My hair was pushed by the salty breeze.

Nathanial: The wind whiped around me and I took a seat, letting my feet dangle above the water.