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Post by Team Sherlock Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:19 pm

Jason: I kissed her back, but something was wrong with Elizabeth, I could feel it. I pulled back and frowned. "I'll be right back." I went into the living room and saw Derek. "Where's Elizabeth?"

Elizabeth: Crap, he had hit me right near the heart and I knew. I was on the floor and I was bleeding, badly. I squeezed my eyes shut and thought of Jason, Kara, and Derek.
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Post by daughteroflight Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:21 pm

Derek- "She went to get her phone, why?"
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Post by Team Sherlock Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:22 pm

Jason: I shook my head. "Something's wrong. I can feel it..."

Elizabeth: It was getting harder to breathe. Derek's face popped into my mind and a tear slid down my cheek.
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Post by daughteroflight Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:24 pm

Derek- "You want me to drive you to your house and see if she's all right?"
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Post by Team Sherlock Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:26 pm

Jason: I thought for a minute. "Thing is, I don't want to worry Kara. Could you maybe go? It's just down a few blocks."

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Post by daughteroflight Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:27 pm

Derek- I nodded. "Sure." I grabbed my car keys. "I'll be right back," I called over my should as I went outside.
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Post by Team Sherlock Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:28 pm

Jason: "Okay." I plastered a fake smile on my face and went back to Kara's room.
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Post by Alice Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:29 pm

smellzlyknirvana wrote:Elizabeth: I was at the dining room table and smiled when I saw Derek.

Gary: I manipulated the shadows to give me more cover. I'd do it myself since the boy was helpless. I sneaked closer to the house and broke in. I looked all around. No one was there.

Jerome: I deepened the kiss and let my arms tighten around her.

Megan couldnt breath but she didnt care.
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Post by Team Sherlock Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:31 pm

Jerome: I pulled back and looked into her eyes with a grin.
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Post by daughteroflight Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:32 pm

Kara- "Is something wrong?" I asked Jason.

Derek- I quickly drove down the road, my concern starting to rise for Elizabeth. Something in the back of my head was saying something was wrong. I finally reached Elizabeth's house and went up to the front door.
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Post by Team Sherlock Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:34 pm

Jason: "No?"
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Post by Alice Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:34 pm

Megan blushed and smiled.
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Post by daughteroflight Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:36 pm

Derek- I found the front door open and walked inside to see Elizabeth on the floor. There was a lot of blood on the floor. "Elizabeth!!!!" I ran to her.
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Post by Team Sherlock Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:41 pm

Jerome: I smiled and brushed my hand against her cheek.

Elizabeth: I heard someone, maybe even Derek yell my name from far away. I didn't even have the energy to open my eyes. I just let out a groan.
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Post by Alice Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:42 pm

Megan groaned to the sound of a ship comming. "Crap."
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Post by daughteroflight Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:45 pm

Derek- I held her in my arms. "Elizabeth! Can you hear me? Please...say something!"
(as you can tell, derek's an emotional wreck right now.lol)
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Post by Team Sherlock Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:47 pm

Jerome: "Crap. Come on." I dived into the water.

Elizabeth: I forced my eyes open, but could barely see. There was someone, and it looked like Derek. "Derek?"
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Post by daughteroflight Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:51 pm

Derek- I strained a smile, knowing she was still alive. "It's me. Don't worry, I'll take you to the hospital and the doctors will help." They have to help her. She needs to live! I carefully picked her up and took her to my car. After making sure, she was seated comfortably, I sped to the hospital. I was grateful it was only down the road.
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Post by Team Sherlock Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:52 pm

Elizabeth: I could feel myself drift into unconsciousness.
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Post by daughteroflight Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:54 pm

Derek- I finally reached the hospital and carried Elizabeth inside. Just hold on, Elizabeth. Hold on. "I need some help!!!" Then some doctors came and took her away to the ER. I sat in the waiting room where my tears finally fell down my face.
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Post by Team Sherlock Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:59 pm

Elizabeth *being taken care of by doctors.

Jason: I wondered what was taking them so long....
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Post by daughteroflight Fri Jul 08, 2011 9:00 pm

Derek- I then remembered Jason and Kara. I had to call home. I dialed the number and waited for someone to pick up.
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Post by Team Sherlock Fri Jul 08, 2011 9:02 pm

Jason: I grabbed the phone and answered. "Hello?"
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Post by daughteroflight Fri Jul 08, 2011 9:05 pm

Derek- "It's me...Elizabeth was hurt really bad. We're at the hospital right now..." My voice broke in the middle of the sentance.
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Post by Team Sherlock Fri Jul 08, 2011 9:07 pm

Jason: I felt all the color drain from my face. I couldn't even speak. I felt a tear slide down my cheek. "Is she going to be alright?"
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