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Post by daughteroflight Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:43 pm

Kara- "Uh, he has a fear of water, remember? He...ran away." I probably sounded like the worst liar in the world, but I had to say something.
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Post by Team Sherlock Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:46 pm

Jason: I dived deeper and felt myself get furious with Jake. He was my friend, he was supposed to listen.

Jake: I looked at her doubtfully. "Where did he really go?"
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Post by daughteroflight Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:47 pm

Kara- I shrugged. "I don't know," I replied.
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Post by Team Sherlock Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:48 pm

Jake: I blew out a breath and walked closer to Kara. I slid a finger under her chin. "Listen Cutie-pie, I know you're lying. Now tell me where my friend went."
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Post by daughteroflight Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:51 pm

Kara- "I told you, I don't know." My heart began to race, but at least Jason got away.
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Post by Team Sherlock Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:53 pm

Jake: I frowned and moved away from her. "When you see him, please tell him to call or something," I said and left. I had seen Jason's tail. He wasn't normal.

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Post by daughteroflight Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:54 pm

Kara- I let out a sigh of relief when he left.
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Post by Team Sherlock Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:58 pm

Jason: I swam around a while and wondered if it was safe to go back to Kara.

Jake: I walked to the board walk and clenched my jaw. There was something up and the only person I would get answers from is that guy. I sighed as I walked.

(Uh, should I be the bad, creepy guy?)
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Post by daughteroflight Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:01 am

(sure. i might make a bad guy later once i think of stuff)

Kara- I sat again in the sand, waiting for Jason to come back. My thoughts wandered to that guy Jake talked about. Were we really as safe as I first thought?
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Post by Team Sherlock Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:04 am

Jason: I swam closer to the shore and heard nothing. I climbed out if the water and sensed Kara's worry. "It'll be okay."

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Post by daughteroflight Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:06 am

Kara- "But what about that guy Jake talked about? How could he possibly know what you are?" I tried to prevent myself from trembling, but failed miserably.
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Post by Team Sherlock Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:07 am

Jason: I patted the ground next to me. "Maybe it was some crazy lunatic. Anyway, Jason is a common name."
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Post by daughteroflight Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:11 am

Kara- I went over next to Jason and laid my head on his shoulder. "I hope you're right," I said.
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Post by daughteroflight Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:17 am

Kara- I wrapped my arms around Jason. "I just don't want to lose you," I whispered.
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Post by Team Sherlock Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:24 am

Jason: I slid my arms around her and held her close. "Me too," I said softly as I brushed a kiss atop her head. "You won't, I promise."

Name: Gary
Age: Uh, old enough to have an 18 year old son.
Gender: Male
Appearance: Tall, tanned, creepy, black hair, black eyes, muscular, a scar over his left eye
Personality: Dark, evil, cold, mean, crazy
Power: can create darkness and shadows, can manipulate shadows, can read emotions, super hearing, and can read minds
Bio: He used to be the king of Atlantis until he was overthrown. He went crazy and evil after he was overthrown, his wife left him for another woman, and his son, Jason, was born. He now wants to stir up trouble and get his spot as King back. To do this he wants to try and kill powerful merpeople. Two examples being his son, Jason, and his niece, Elizabeth.

(awwww.)

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Post by daughteroflight Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:28 am

(ikr?! whoah son? what a twist! that's just awesome!)

Kara- I closed my eyes and listened to the sound of the crashing waves. I didn't want to let Jason go at all, afraid that I could lose him.
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Post by Team Sherlock Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:37 am

(:3 >.< Part that annoys me is all of that came to me off the top of my head, but with the story I'm writing I'm getting nada. Stupid brain...)

Jason: I held her close in my arms and closed my eyes. I never wanted to move. I started to stroke her hair to calm her because I could sense her unease.

Jake: My phone buzzed and I looked at it. There was a text that told me to go to the ferris wheel and wait beside it.

Gary: I looked around for the ferris wheel for Jake. he knew Jason and could be a major help in my plans.
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Post by daughteroflight Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:40 am

(yeah, I'm having the same problem too. I guess when you write stuff with other people, you get more ideas than on your own)

Kara- I felt a cold tear begin to fall down my face. I tried to relax in Jason's arms.
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Post by Team Sherlock Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:46 am

(I guess.

Jason: "Shhh. It'll be okay," I whispered and pulled her even closer. My tail had dried and turned into legs already. "We can leave and go to my house if you want?"

Jake: I went by the ferris wheel and saw that creepy guy I had seen earlier. I approached him with caution. "What do you want?"

Gary: I stared at the boy and smiled. "I want to talk to you. Did you do as I asked?"

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Post by daughteroflight Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:47 am

Kara- I gave a small nod. "Sure."
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Post by Team Sherlock Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:52 am

Jason: I stood and offered her a hand.

Jake: "I dragged Jason in the water and it seemed like he had a tail."

Gary: "Like I said, he's a merman. Merpeople are evil and deserve t be extinct."

Elizabeth: I smiled and laid my head on Derek'd shoulder.
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Post by daughteroflight Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:58 am

Kara- I forced a smile and took his hand.

Derek- I grinned and wrapped an arm around her shoulders.
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Post by Team Sherlock Tue Jul 05, 2011 1:13 am

Jason: I led her into my house and locked the door. "There, safe and sound." I slid my arms around her. "I won't let anything come near us and if anything does come near us, I'll pull out my mad kung fu skills."

Elizabeth: "What do you want to do now?"

Jake: I stared at the man.

Gary: "Merpeople are evil, trust me."
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Post by daughteroflight Tue Jul 05, 2011 1:15 am

Kara- I couldn't help but laugh. "I don't doubt it," I said.

Derek- I shrugged. "We could go get a snack somewhere, if you'd like."
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Post by Team Sherlock Tue Jul 05, 2011 1:19 am

Jason: I kissed her and pulled back. "What do you want to do?"

Elizabeth: I cuddled against him. "It's all up to you."

*Gary and Jake are discussing why mepeople are evil*
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