C. D. - character development

Dan:
I touch somethin shiny

"Wait I don't know if you should-" started Cassie, but it was to late one by one the book shelves fell over in a domino effect.

Dan:
My eyes get wide O_O and I say, "Oh crap"

"Oh crap is right! What do we do now?!" said Evan.

Dan:
"Shall we run?"

"Uh...bit we can't leave without Skipper," said Evan.

Dan:
"Crap"
(Regret u are needed!)

((In a flash I am here! Character-Chat-Man to the rescue!))

Skipper tackles Dan to the ground.
"Try to keep down, and put this on." Skipper unrolls a compact roll of cloth from one of her pouches, unrolling it into a long black full-body-covering piece of clothing. "Wear it, and don't bow too low to people. You'll look like a priest of Ka-Tan: Unrecognisable, and well-respected."

"Ka-Tan?" asked Cassie.

"Why does he have too keep low?" asked Evan.

"A great martial and spiritual leader. Like a cross between your historical figures Hannibal Barca and Buddha. I would have thought it was obvious why he would have to lie low."

"Don't know much about those religions..."

"Hannibal Barca was a general from your history. I don't know much more than that. Ka-Tan taught about the art of inner peace and outer action."

"Gandi was a monk who taught peace." said Evan.

"Haven't heard of him," replies Skipper.

"Never mind," said Evan.

"I'm not familiar with much of your culture," explains Skipper.

"It's okay," Evan laughed, "we're not really familar with yours."

"I can imagine," replies Skipper. "You weren't aware of it until today."

"Yeah," said Evan.

"So what do you think of my world?"

"It's neat," said Cassie. "I've never seen anything like it."

Dan:
"What? Why? I am the first human to visit your world therefore I am an ambassador and I have diplomatic immunity, I cant be touched!"

"JUST PUT IT ON!!!!" roared Cassie.

Dan:
"JEEZ! Fine!" I grab the black thing and put it on, "Happy?"

"Yes," sighed Cassie. Evan looked at her with wide, he didn't think she was able to yell.