A New Ending

Nathanial: I smile down at her and cup her cheek with my hand and gently rub my thumb against it, loving how beautiful she is in the moonlight. "Maybe it will be better since I'm going to be attending it as well."

Alison: I smlied. "What would you like me to wear?" I asked

Nathanial: I looked up at the moon to think clearly and then looked back at her with a smile. "A beautiful and elegant midnight blue with white trimming on the dress. Anything that will show off your beautiful body, my love." I say and bend down for a kiss.

Alison: I gave a seductive smile and put my lips to his. He was all I wanted for now and forever.

Nathanial: I pulled her body against mine and deepened the kiss.

Alison: I felt dizzy and wanted more. I smiled under the kiss thinking of how I will have him forever.

Nathanial: I pulled back and smiled, placing my mouth beside her ear and whispered, "Do you want to continue this here or take it elsewhere?"

Alison: I felt my heart racing and my cheeks getting hot. "Well my love the sun is almost up. We have the next night." I said with a smile. I kissed him and turned to leave.

Nathanial: Disappoint crept onto my face, but I smiled and kissed her. I watched her leave and then headed home.

Alison: I got home and hurried off to bed but I couldnt sleep. Nathanial was I could think about. Why does he love me so but I treat him horridly in the market place. I closed my eyes and pictured what our wedding would look like.

~ LATER THAT MORNING~

Alison: I was walking with my little sister Elizabeth in the market place. She wanted to get some lace and trim for her dress. Nathanial had been on my mind. I wore my red dress and my brown hair was put up and had beads in it.

Nathanial: I dressed in nice, rich fabrics--trying to look nice for the woman of my dreams, the girl I couldn't stop thinking about and headed down to the market.

Alison: We went into the fabric shop and I saw a midnight blue. I smiled and picked it up and white lace and trim.
"Sissy I want a red dress." said my little sister
I looked at her and smiled. "Well then its a good thing you have one. I will touch it up and make it look beautiful."
My sister smiled and I paid for the fabric trim and lace.
"Now we must hurry so I can get this to Mrs. Grandpre before she has too many orders."
We hurried out of the shop.

Nathanial: I spotted Alison coming down towards me and smiled.

Alison: I took my sister by the hand and lead her down the pathway. I accidently ran into a gentleman and looked up. It was Nathanial.

Nathanial: I steadied her and smiled. "Sorry, my lady."

Alison: I felt my face get red but smiled. I looked into his eyes and saw love in them. I could have stayed there all day but my sister was pulling at my hand. I shook out of my trance and said "Why no sir it twas my fault."

Nathanial: I smiled and bowed politely and kissed her hand before she went. I looked into her eyes with love.

Alison: I turned back and looked at him.
"Elizabeth will you do my the pleasure of taking these and giving them to Mrs. Grandpre and telling that they are from me? She should understand what to do. Oh thank you Lizzy." I said with a smile as my sister of 11 nodded and hurried off.

Nathanial: I looked down at her with a smile. "Are you not supposed to be doing that?"

Alison: I smiled. "Aye but she wont tell. She will think I was getting her candy." I said with a laugh. All of the sudden I felt my eyes looking at my dress and my hands went to my hair to fix anything that needed to be. My mother had put cosmetics on my face for a gentleman to ask me to the ball.

(isn't she supposed to marry a duke? so nathanial's and her love is forbidden?)

(Sort of its hard to explain lol but yes.)

(oh, well can you explain a little? so i understand more?)

(ya sure! basicly it is a arranged marriage but he is in love with a servant girl and Alison knows but thier parents dont and its a mess because he wants to marry the servant girl but Alison didnt have anyone but she met Nathianal and so on and so forth)

(oh, but shouldn't she go with the duke and then meet up with nathanial?)