The Summer that changed my life forever...

Brok: "Yup." Trey was mostly staying out of the way while Paul and Ryan duked it out. Idiots. "I bet Paul and Ryan will lose first."

Paul: "Hey!"

Ryan: "We will not!"

Dakota: I laughed.

Brok: "What do you think?"

(Oh, by the way, did you look at LAFS 1 yet? Sorry to bother you about it :/)

Dakota: "About what?"

(I wasn't sure what you wanted me to look at, since I already edited it...what do you want me to look at?)

Brok: "Who do you think is gonna lose first?"

Shane: I was kicked off the stage by Paul. "Hey!"

Paul: "Sorry!"

Shane: "You're gonna pay for that!"

Trey: I smirked. They were ignoring me, and therefore, I was winning.

(sorry about all the CP boys posting a lot of irrelevant crap.)

(the ending. I'm not sure I fixed it.)

Dakota: "Shane, maybe."

(lol, it's okay x) it's entertaining. where are we taking this, though? Are they just going to play games with the boys all night? lawl)

(ohhh. well hm. I think it was just a little too intense with all the "I love no one" stuff. It needs to be built-up too, it came out of nowhere)

Shane: "WHY ME?!"

Paul: Ryan and I ended up dying at the same time. "Dang it!"

Ryan: "It's your fault!"

Brok: I rolled my eyes. "I think Paul and Ryan."

(lol that's what boys do. Did I tell you about the time there were seven guys at my house?)

(fjafiopafadjfa. Ay yai yai. Maybe he should talk about how he's never had a girlfriend and maybe that's why? I don't know. How else can I end it?)

Dakota: "You can't guess after it's happened, silly."

(xP. and no, you didn't)

(maybe. And you don't have to end it so... deeply.)

Brok: "They still have a life each."

Shane: I attacked Paul.

(Let's just say...seven boys = huge mess, unhappy Jelsa, and meant I served them all breakfast the next morning and cleaned up after them.)

(I'm gonna pull it up and see what I can do.)

Dakota: "Whatever."

(xD why were they at your house?)

(okay-doke, I'm about to give it a second look, too)

Ryan: I ended up dying first. "Kill Paul!" I yelled at Shane.

Shane: "Gladly!"

Brok: I laughed. "Are you bored?"

(I have brothers x_x)

(I might have an idea, but it's kinda lame. Maybe instead of the no love part, maybe it's "I was such a freaking mess. If I thought about it, most rock-stars probably were. Well, good thing the rest of the world didn’t really know me." It's still not that great though :/)

Dakota: I shrugged. "A little. It's okay, though."

(I thought you only had one brother? :o

(that's definitely better)

Brok: I laughed and gave her a quick kiss. "I'll entertain you if you'd like."

Trey: I ended up killing Paul.

Shane: *eventually gets killed by Trey.*

(Tengo dos x_x)

(Is it alright for now?)

Dakota: I pulled away from the kiss. "Not now, Brok."

(...does that mean two? *doesn't take Spanish*)

(yush )

Brok: "Fine," I said. "Hey, it's our turn."

(yup.)

(I actually found LAFS newww 1-3 so disregard yours. sorry! I thought I lost it.)

Dakota: "I don't wanna play," I whined.

(What? I'm confused)

Brok: "You said you would!"

(never mind. ignore what I sent you. I'm gonna get to work on three.)

(I was playing ping pong just now and brok entered right after trey did to watch me. I was so happy xD)

Dakota: "I never promised, though."

Brok: I sighed. "Well, you don't have to. But you know you want to."

Dakota: "I don't, though. I'm probably going home soon, anyway." I smiled.

Brok: I frowned. "I don't want you to leave though, Kota..."

Trey: I rolled my eyes.

Ryan: I smirked. "Get a room."

Dakota: I rolled my eyes at Ryan's comment and answered Brok's. "It's not like you won't see me again soon..." I /thought/ at least, though I had never asked him when he'd be leaving again.

Brok: I sighed. "It's gonna be a while..."

(how long should it be?)

Dakota: I raised an eyebrow. "Oh? Are you leaving tomorrow?"

(hmm I don't know, what's considered "awhile"?)

Brok: "Day after that."

(uh...two weeks?)