C. D. - character development

Dan:
"HA!"

"I'm sorry to say but those three *points to Andrew, Liz, and Cassie* can't handle it. No offense. You at least would be able to stop him....it'll be Dan's turn next." smirked Ezra.

"I can take care of myself." said Evan.

"At you size...you need super vision."

"What if I don't want to be baby sat," said Evan, standing up and drawing him self up to full height. He towered over Ezra.

"Too bad. It's for your best intrest."

((GH. I COULD SO BRING IN ARIA RIGHT NOW.

...

Want me to~?))

"Alright, as long as I don't have to do it all the time."

(THATS WHAT I THOUGHT!!! JUST WAIT OF SHE GWTS A LOAD OF ANDREW AND EVAN!!!!)

The small of that cloudy had faded a while ago, but now it was coming back.
"Aaaah...shiznit," I said. "We've got a cloudy headed our way, closing in fast. Andrew, hide yourself. NOW."

Dan:
"Whats a cloudy?"

"Angel. Uhhhh..." thought Andrew, he pushed him self under Evan's hand.

I looked up, scowling, as a cloudy approached in the distance. The figure rocketed towards us on gleaming, white wings. I spread my black wings and leaped into the air, rising to meet the cloudy. Oh, no...it was that one!
"Oi, you!" I called, cupping my hands around my mouth. "GEE-TEE-EFF-OH!"
The angel spread her wings as she neared, slowing down and breaking into a hover. Her brilliant, blue eyes were gleeful, and her long, golden hair rippled in the breeze like a wave of sunshine. She wasn't wearing a glamour, so her ears had an elegant point and her skin had a faint, golden glow.
She made me sick.
"I'm not done with you, demon!" she called, pointing at me. "We have a score to settle!"
"The Hell we do!" I snapped. "Stop following me, glow-worm!"
"I'll follow you until I've filled my contract," she sing-songed, winking, "and not before!"
"Then it appears that we've reached an impasse," I responded menacingly.

Dan:
"OH! OH! I CAN HELP!" I yell flying up and at the angel as hard and fast as I can.

Evan watched the fight, his hand felt cold. He lifted it up and there was a boy with blond hair and blue eyes.

"What are you doing under there?! I could've hurt you!" he hissed.

"I'm already dead," smirked Andrew.

"How...what?"

"I'm already dead," he said slowly. Apparently the potion had allowed Evan to see him. "I'm Andrew."

"Ah, ah, ah!" the angel said as she dodged, wagging a finger. "This is between me and the demon!" She turned to me. "Now where were we? Oh, right! I'm going to destroy your body, then drag you to the Upper World!"

Dan:
"D***!" I mutter and turn back and launch a blast of lightning at her.

"This is stupid," said Evan, shaking his head.

(fixed it)

.

(I FIXED IT)

(I SAW!)

(LOL)

The angel muttered an incantation and threw her hands forward, redirecting the lighting and shooting it off towards me. I dodged, feeling the air crackle as it narrowly missed me.
"You, mortal!" the angel called to Evan. "You're really big! How did that happen? You look so funny!" She giggled. "Did the demon do it? You, know, I could fix you...if you swore to turn away from demons and embrace angels!"

"Ezra did it."

"Who's Ezra?" the angel asked. "Is he another demon?! Is he around here?!" Her face got really excited, which I did not like. But at least she wasn't Hell-bent on attacking me for the moment.

"That boy," said Evan, pointing to the boy who was about sixteen with black hair, inky black eyes, and about 6'1.

Dan:
I started getting mad. "YOU ARE SO ANNOYING!" I yell at the angel. I growled. "No, no not know!" I yell. I growl again and start howling like a dog. Then I start to plummet to the the ground. I hit and land in a crater. In the crater no one can see me as I change. Then I black out.

Stella:
"No, Dan!" I whisper. I gasp as he jumps with his powerful werewolf strength. I watch as he soars towars the angel in his powerful werewolf form.

"Oooh, wow!" the angel giggled as the werewolf jumped at her. He was coming from the ground, though, so she had no trouble dodging him as he ascended. "A werewolf! You know, those came about because of a spell gone wrong?"
"Dan, if you can still hear me," I yelled, "don't waste your strength! This is between me and her. And don't underestimate her!"
"Aw, thank you!" the angel said. I smacked my forehead.

"That's it," said Evan, and he reached up and tried grab them by the wings.

"Ah!" we both yelped as Evan grabbed our wings.
"Hey, lemme go!" the angel whined.
"Yeah, Evan, let go!" I ordered.