C. D. - character development

"I'm not bothered," remarks Mirochai-Neptuna. "You might have trouble killing me."

((Mirochai-Neptuna is only ever alluded to, rarely used as anything more than a minor character, because the rest of the story cannot cope with her power level. However, it is mentioned that she killed and ate Zeus, Poseidon, Loki, and Hastur the Unspeakable. Oh, and Hades is a whiny emo. I don't know why.))

((DAN. IS. A. MARTY. STU.

*angry face*))

"Go ahead and try to kill everyone, Wolf Boy," I said. "I'm a demon, remember? I can't die. Seriously."

Dan:
"I need someone to fight, with my electric powers and, you need to be able to take alot of damage. Neptuna? How about you?" I ask facing her.

"You think I can't take a lot of damage?" I asked, my pride hurt. "Don't insult me! And remember, pal, I have magic powers. Hit me with your best shot! Well, try to hit me, anyway."

"So do we," Ezra smirked.

Dan:
"No, I said I think you can take a lot of punishment, and perfect I need a hard fight and you have to make me mad I mean really mad, furious!" I say then I throw myself forward my fists sparking with electricity. I slam my fist into (Crap forget WD's charrie's name, again!) face and I then slide back across the ground, "Make it a challenge please. PYRKAGIAS!" A column of flame erupts around her.

(Pyrkagias is Greek for fire. And WD please do not waste this chance, I have set you up for the perfect Constantine line for your charrie! If you haven't seen Constantine, Constantine is a demon hunter and one time when he uses fire on a demon the demon stands laughs and yells, "Fire? I was born of this!" and Constantine replies with a bottle of Holy Water to the face! Not sayin I'll whip out the Holy Water I need a fight after all)

"This'll be interestimg," said Andrew, stepping out of the make shift body to go next to Liz.

(Waiting for WD sorry!)

(Ok)

((Her name is Leslie, lol xD))

I was quick to throw up a fire protection spell, smirking and crossing my arms.
Whoawhoawhoa wait. This was too perfect! It was time to make a reference.
"Fire?" I yelled, laughing. "I was born of this!" I paused, then added, "Not really! Go ahead, just try dousing me with some holy water. I dare you. Do it."

"I wanna fight next!" shouted Andrew. "I verse winner!"

(YES!!!!!!! CONSTANTINE REFERENCE!!!!!!)
Dan:
"Ooh, this should be fun. HADI!" I yell and the ground erupts around her.

(Hadi is Egyptian for destroy since Egyptian is even older than Greek it holds more power than if it was said in Greek)

(Lol)

I dropped the part of my glamour that affected my shoulderblades, grinning widely. The back of my shirt ripped, giving way to an explosion of sleek, black feathers. My wings burst into life in a ripple beginning at my shoulderblades, flexing out to their fullest span. I wasted no time, jumping into the air and pumping my wings.
"Catch me if you can, Wolfy!" I teased, sticking my tongue out at him. "And you still haven't tried that holy water yet!"

"Woah," said Andrew.

(rofl where's Aria?)

((Being distracted by something shiny

*is waiting on condog*))

(She would....I can't wait to have her freak out on Andrew)

Dan:
"Flying? Really? That I don't even need magic for!" I soar into the air on a current of blue sparks. I propel myself forward and charg my right fist with as much electricity as I can. Then I send the bolt of lightning soaring strait at her chest. I keep pace with the lightning, hiding in its shadow, after it strikes her I barrel into her to see if I can do any damage physically. "Cmon!" I yell, "I told you I needed to be mad to show Neptuna! This is just fun!"

"I could make you angry," murmurs Mirochai-Neptuna. She goes stiff, then starts writhing and thrashing (At this point I lift the force holding her to human scale slightly) space and time warps and shifts as she stretches, almost as though yawning, and continues stretching until she is a hundred feet tall. Luckily the matted weeds grow (well, duplicate) with her. She towers over the group, summoning the storm-clouds. Her 'hair' thrashes in fury.
"I haven't even started yet."
She extends a single finger towards Dan, cursing him with an accelerated form of smallpox.
WARNING: the most dry and boring description of the symptoms of smallpox is still intensely graphic.
The blood rises to the surface of the his skin in hundreds of dark blisters, which join together, turning into a mat of drying blood that sloughs off, leaving swathes of raw and pustulent flesh. His lungs back up with blood and mucus, causing near-constant coughing and extreme internal pain.

((There is one more symptom that is incredibly horrible. I don't think you'd want it described to you, let alone have it to your character. It is the final symptom of smallpox that generally precedes death by less than a day, but this will be seconds before.))

Dan:
I cough up blood but my werewolf abilities keep me from dying. My body heals it as fast as the disease spreads. I throw dozens of balls of lightning at Neptuna.

(Just FYI the only way to seriously make Dan mad is to attack Stella)

Andrew stepped back , looking at the hundred foot tall being and then at Dan. He cringed at the sight of small pox, he had seen many cases of it.

Mirochai-Neptuna feels the lightning as you would feel the static shock from a comb. However, the disease is not as effective as she'd hoped. She looks at Stella.

((I was considering necrotising fasciitis for Stella.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Necrotising_fasciitis
I hope you haven't eaten recently...))

"This isn't going to end well," said Liz, shaking her head.

(Actually, I am very famialr with Necrotising Faciitis, it is utterly disgusting. I am familiar with it because it is commonly confused with cellulitis and the doctor says that my mom has cellulitis and I made her go back and get checked for necrotizing faciitis too)
Dan:
I follow Neptuna's gaze, "Don't you dare!" I yell. I hurl a continuos stream of lightning at Neptuna's face.

"It doesn't look like she feels it Dan," noted Ezra, shaking his head.