Re: C. D. - character development

by Banshee Mon May 30, 2011 5:01 pm

"Neare Evan...well more behind....don't shoot the demon.."

by **Echo** Mon May 30, 2011 5:03 pm

((I actually want him to shoot her. Fun times would ensue xD))

"God!" I shouted, ducking. Ah, what delicious irony. Also, God didn't exist.
"Keep going!" the angel urged. "Kill it dead!"
"Oh would you shut up already?!" I demanded, scrambling onto Evan's hand.

by Banshee Mon May 30, 2011 5:11 pm

Evan moved his hand carefully, sitting Leslie down next to Andrew. Evan used his other hand to block Aria.

by Regret Mon May 30, 2011 5:44 pm

"I don't want to shoot the big guy," mumbles Tony, still staring wildly about for Andrew.

by **Echo** Mon May 30, 2011 5:53 pm

"Even if you do, it won't hurt him!" the angel called.
"You be quiet!" I snapped.

by Banshee Mon May 30, 2011 5:55 pm

"Thank you," said Evan.

Andrew appeared behind Tony, tapping him on the shoulder. "Behind you."

by Stark Mon May 30, 2011 6:01 pm

Dan:
I Dash at the Angel trying to tear it apart. (Dan is just narrating because its easy that way, the actual sentient Dan is totally out, he is kinda sleeping)

(Just so you know in my book a werewolf's Dash is equivalent to that of a vampire's Flit in The Vampire's Assistant, basically it is the one bit of magic that an untrained werewolf can use, it is there mode of quick transportation, it is super speed basically easier to explain it as magical induced super speed)

by Banshee Mon May 30, 2011 6:02 pm

Evan's hand is still in front of the angel with Dan speeding toward it.

by **Echo** Mon May 30, 2011 6:05 pm

"Uh-oh!" the angel yelped, reaching into her pocket while simultaneously uttering a magic word. Suddenly, she became intangible.

by Banshee Mon May 30, 2011 6:06 pm

"Crap," said Andrew. "Now she's like me!"

by Stark Mon May 30, 2011 8:19 pm

Dan:
I barrel straight through her and I let out a surprised yelp and fall on my face. I get back up and try again, and again, and again. Being mostly animal at this point in time I had no cognative skills telling me my efforts were futile.

Stella:
I change and run towards Dan. When I reach him I leap on top off him and pin him to the ground with the help of Peter so he can't move. He thrashes and tries to bite us but his efforts are in vain.

Peter:
"DAN! STOP IT!" I yell and punch him in the face. "SNAP OUT OF IT!"

Stella:
I turn to (Insert WD's charrie's name here, crap, I forgot again) and say, "You take care of the Angel," I grin sweetly, "We've got Dan"

by Banshee Mon May 30, 2011 8:20 pm

"Need any help?" asked Evan.

by Stark Mon May 30, 2011 8:24 pm

Stella:
"If you have anything to calm him down that might help him change back. It has to be quick acting though because if it isn't his enhanced werewolf system will reject it"

by **Echo** Mon May 30, 2011 8:24 pm

((I still think it's odd that you and I both have protagonists named Peter, condog xD))

Leslie
"Alright, angel, it's you and me now!" I fired up the runes on my hands, forming twin swords out of the nearby shadows.
"Finally!" the angel exclaimed with relish, an opal-hilted rapier fizzling into life in her right hand.
I jumped into the air, spreading my wings; the angel did the same. The fight was on!

by Stark Mon May 30, 2011 8:33 pm

(lol sorry, when did you start your book with your Peter? and if you started it before mine I will give in and say that your Peter is superior to my Peter)

by Banshee Mon May 30, 2011 8:36 pm

"That would be Ezra..." said Evan.

"Nope...sorry." said Ezra.

"How about this?' Evan said scooping Dan into his hand.

by Stark Mon May 30, 2011 8:41 pm

Stella:
"NO DROP HIM!" I yell. The last thing we need is a gigantic werewolf running amok.

Dan:
I snap at Evan and try to bite his hand.

by Banshee Mon May 30, 2011 8:43 pm

"It's not contagious." said Ezra.

"Nice doggy," Evan grinned.

by Stark Mon May 30, 2011 8:46 pm

Stella:
"WITH US IT IS! ANY EXCHANGE OF ANY DNA IN A WEREWOLVES BODY TO ANOTHER PERSONS BODY WILL RESULT IN THAT PERSON BEING A WEREWOLF! SALIVA, BLOOD, HAIR, ANYTHING! SO DROP HIM EVAN!" I continue yelling franticly.

Dan:
I continue trying to bite Evan.

Peter:
"JUST DROP HIM ALREADY!"

by Banshee Mon May 30, 2011 8:47 pm

Evan set Dan down gently on the ground.

by Stark Mon May 30, 2011 8:48 pm

Dan:
I snarl and hurl myself at Ezra.

Stella:
I leap onto his back pinning him to the ground.

Peter:
I help Stella.

Stella:
"Thank you Evan"

by Banshee Mon May 30, 2011 8:53 pm

"What if I pin him down?" asked Evan.

by Stark Mon May 30, 2011 8:56 pm

Stella:
"I think its better if we keep him pinned until he changes back, we are already immune to the bite"

Dan:
I continue to thrash and snarl. Then I suddenly get tired and stop moving. I calm down and become human again. When I regain my senses I wake up to a mouthful of Stella's fur. "MMMMMMMAAAAAAAHAHHHAHHAHHHMMMM!" I bellow. Which is roughly translated to, "STELLA, PETER GET YOUR FURRY A**ES OFF OF ME!"

by Banshee Mon May 30, 2011 8:58 pm

"He's baaacccckkkk," Ezra sing songed.

by **Echo** Mon May 30, 2011 8:59 pm

Leslie
The angel glimpsed the ghost again, and for a moment, she looked conflicted. I'm sure of what her thought process was... "Go for the demon and fill the contract, or go for the mortal soul and hit the black market?"
Neither outcome looked particularly good to me.

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