Love Bites

This is about love. Finding love, losing love, getting back a lost love, any type of love you want.
Setting -- let's start out at a house party thrown by my character Rayne and see where we go from there

Character Format: I'm going to put my character here as the example

Name: Rayne Jones
Age: 16
Personality: outgoing, fighter, loving, loyal, flirt
Looks: medium auburn hair and deep chocolate eyes, dancer legs
Other: She is rich but not stuck-up and she hates it when people try and use her.

(Is it alright if the character is paranormal? Like angel/demon?
They won't use their powers in a crazy way.)

Yeah that's fine!

Fun, fun.

Name: Mara
Age: 17
Personality: genuine and kind but slightly hot tempered if someone gives her reason to be brave
Looks: 5foot 4, blonde, she likes to dress military style and her hair in a ponytail
Other: She is dating a soldier who is 19 and on his first mission in Afghanistan

Is this an acceptable character?

I'll join and fill the testosterone void...

that'd be nice!

Name: Greydon
Age: 18
Personality: Quiet, Calm, understanding
Looks: Pale, freckles on his nose, chestnut colored hair, fit, tall, hazel eyes
Other: Has a bright silver lip ring

Name: Axel
Age:17
Personality: Flirty, wild, a little immature, but he knows how to have fun
Looks: Black hair, cropped, but not to short, blue-grey eyes, slight tan, tall, muscular-sinewy

Other: Has his eyebrow pierced but can'tr see it though bangs

wait for more people or start?

I dun care... We can do whatever you want, so if you want to chat, set the scene!

Dee wrote:Fun, fun.

Name: Mara
Age: 17
Personality: genuine and kind but slightly hot tempered if someone gives her reason to be brave
Looks: 5foot 4, blonde, she likes to dress military style and her hair in a ponytail
Other: She is dating a soldier who is 19 and on his first mission in Afghanistan

Is this an acceptable character?

yeah this is fine, I love it!

Rayne - I looked down from the top of the grand staircase to see the crowd below. Of course everyone from school came. I was known for my massive parties. I looked down at my mid-thigh length, navy blue, halter neck dress and matching heels as I played with my curls and wondered how people saw me. Ignoring my thoughts I walked down the stairs gracefully wondering who I would talk to.

Greydon: I parked the Escalade near the curb and adjusted my hair. (He has a skater cut...) I glanced down at my outfit, hoping I wast to overdressed. I had a cream colored shirt on, rolled up to my elbows, a blood red satin tie, and black pants. I walked in the door, just to see Rayne walking down the saits. I threw her a smile and walked towards the drinks.

Rayne: I see Grydon at the table with all the drinks and smile back at him. I go up beside him, "Hey, glad you could make it."

Greydon: I smiled and nodded. "Yeah, i wouldn't miss it." I smiled. I mean, unless I had something better to do. i didn't really like going out, but I felt like I had to, I had to be polite. And I really wasn't good at rejecting people.

Rayne - I smile knowing that tragically automatic response, "This isn't something you would normally do is it?" I ask.

Greydon: I turned so my whole body was facing her and cocked a brow. "What do you mean?" I asked.

Rayne - "I just mean that this isn't what you'd rather be doing if you had anything else to do," I correct myself not wanting him to take what I said the wrong way.

Grey: "Maybe not, but I'm glad I'm here." I smiled. "I wouldn't mind coffe, but that's about it."

can you give me about 15 minutes to eat?

Name: Kyra Devore
Age: 17
Personality: Punky, perverted ;], quirky, slightly shy, not good at small talk.
Looks: Medium length wavy brunette hair with violet tips, Warm brown eyes, small dotting of freckles, 'bout 5'3''.
Other: Ky has a hard time getting comfortable enough to show her personality to people. She also has a lily tattoo on her right side.

Kyra: I walked into the party. It looked sick, but I hardly knew anyone. There was a kid from my psychology class, and the girl who's locker was 5 down from mine. ..That was kind of it. I'd been to parties like this before, but I didnt usually go alone like this.
I walked aimlessly through people. This should be interesting.

Mara: I walked along the edge of the group. I was slightly uncomfortable in such a casual but tiny outfit. I had Ame to blame for that. My silly little sister couldn't come tonight so she made me dress up in her place. I wished that I had refused and gone with my ironed shirt and slacks. There was a guy across the room that looked familiar. I walked toward him. I tried to recall anything that I could about him.
hmmm... The girls love him, he's a flirt, and he's moderately funny... Okay, I decided, I'll see what he's up to.

TheCannibalKid wrote:Grey: "Maybe not, but I'm glad I'm here." I smiled. "I wouldn't mind coffe, but that's about it."

Rosa - I gave him a sly smile, "Follow me, but shh, this is my own personal secret."

Kyra: I weaved in and out of people, trying to find my way to the dance floor. If I wasnt talking to someone, I could at least try to look like I fit in.

erm nvm...