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Post by fallen rose Wed Nov 10, 2010 10:32 pm

It looks like a normal big city during the day but night it’s a whole different story. There a society called the hearts and everyone in it is different the nonmember said not even human at all. In the hearts there are titles and to get a different title or move higher in the title system is to being strong and kills anyone that is above you. Or get protection from higher ranking members in return you pay them back as a slave

( pretty much the goal is to rise up in system and stay alive)

titles:
1. Endless ( they rule the whole city and this is only one of them at a time)
2. Bondless ( they rule parts of city but still have to obey endless)
3. Painless ( they are the guard of bondless and endless and highest ranking guards/warrior)
4. Tearless ( they are lowest ranking warrior of bondless )
5. Trustless ( they are the traitors of hearts)
6. Friendless ( they are the spies of hearts)
7. Sleepless ( they are the thieves of hearts)
8. Memoryless ( they are strong member that are not bondless or endless)
9. Breathless (they are the showgirls and dancers of the hearts)
10. Warless ( they are weak member at are slave of the memoryless)
11. Nameless ( they are weak member that are without protection from a memoryless)
12. Skinless ( they are on the outside of system and don’t follow the orders from endless and bondless)

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Post by fallen rose Wed Nov 10, 2010 10:36 pm

Name: vage sin
Gender: female
Age: 17
Species: sin eater
Title: skinless
Personality: is a loner most of time and can stay her ground in fight when it comes to it
Looks: during the day she look human and day she look more like a fairies
Day:
http://josecoutourmusic.webs.com/GothicFairies6.jpg
Night:
http://www.timeofthefaeries.com/totfnewsite/vamp_vampires.html ( its the second one on the top row)

Bio: she never care about system she as she grew up in the hearts and she always knew the system was bunch of liars so it will come crashing down but strangely she is friends with the endless


Name: sterling blood
Gender: male
Age: 18
Species: angel
Title: endless
Personality: seem cold but actually friendly specially to his friend vage
Looks: look emo teen during day and night looks like a gothic angel also he has sliver eyes
Day without wings and night with wings:
http://s.myniceprofile.com/myspacepic/296/29693.jpg
Bio: he is the youngest endless that ever been in the big city
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Post by anonymouswriter Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:14 pm

Name: Anastasia Thorn
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Species: Elemental (controls fire)
Title: Breathless
Personality: distant, sensual, doesn't trust, commitment issues
Looks: broken hearts Ana_ivanovic_stunning
Bio: She was betrayed by her old friend when she was 16 and has never been the same, no one knows the whole story.
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Post by anonymouswriter Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:19 pm

Name: Derek Hilt
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Species: Elemental (controls water)
Title: Trustless
Personality: deceitful, cold, passionate
Looks:broken hearts Cute%2BEmo%2BBoy
Bio: He is the friend that betrayed Anastasia, he is back now to try and get her to take him back, and he will do anything to have her again ANYTHING
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Post by fallen rose Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:23 pm

(okay lets start)

sterling: i walk down the street to one of the clubs as my painless follow me just in case something i know nothing too big will happen

vage: i sat at the bar of the club with my drink i know sterling will show up at this place soon
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Post by anonymouswriter Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:25 pm

Anastasia - I sense someone following me as I make my way into the bar and try to shake the feeling.

Derek - She can feel my presence, but she ignores it. I follow her slowly, tracking her every move, and wait for my chance to confront her.
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Post by fallen rose Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:33 pm

vage: i saw a girl came to bar and i could tell something was wrong with her " are you okay?"
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Post by anonymouswriter Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:36 pm

Anastasia - "I'm fine," I lied. I was nervous and for the first time in a long time I didn't have my wall up.
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Post by fallen rose Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:39 pm

vage:" are you sure?" i ask knowing she was lying
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Post by anonymouswriter Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:40 pm

Anastasia - I sighed, "Not really, but it'll be ok in the end, it always is," I tell her. "I'm Anastasia, by the way."
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Post by fallen rose Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:41 pm

vage:" nice to meet you anastasia i'm vage " i said before taking a sip of my drink
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Post by anonymouswriter Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:48 pm

Anastasia - "Hello," I say slightly shyly, usually my wall helps me be outrageously outgoing, but when it's down I get incredibly self-conscious

Derek - I walk out of the shadows and head to the bartender, careful to stay out of Anastasia's view for the time being. I hear her speaking to a girl named Vage and notice her lack of confidence. Yep, she can definitely feel my presence. I smile at the unconscious effect I am having on her.
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Post by fallen rose Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:51 pm

vage; i look behind me and saw sterling walk in " are you part of the hearts?"

sterling: i walk in the club and i saw vage at the bar talking to a girl
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Post by anonymouswriter Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:53 pm

Anastasia - I bit my lip, "Yeah, I'm a Breathless."
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Post by fallen rose Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:59 pm

vage:" good just to let you know the endless is in the club" i said as sterling walk closer this way
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Post by anonymouswriter Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:07 pm

Anastasia - I froze, crap! I wasn't in a state for me to be near anyone really, especially the Endless. I was too open emotionally. I was too unprotected. That was when I saw a person leaning against the bar, one I knew all to well. A whisper escaped my breath, "Derek."

Derek - She noticed me and I threw her a smile heading towards her, "Why hello there Anastasia, darling." I try to kiss her cheek but she jerks away and I take pleasure in seeing a tear fall from her earthy brown eyes.
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Post by fallen rose Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:17 pm

vage:" leave her alone trustless " i said calling out that guys title
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Post by anonymouswriter Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:20 pm

Derek - I glared at Vage, who had called me out, "This isn't any of your business."

Anastasia - So many thoughts were running through my mind at the speed of light. The only thing that I could feel was Derek's presence. I had to instincts, one was to kiss him and the other was to hit him. I picking the hitting one and punched him hard right in his chest knocking the breath out of him.
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Post by fallen rose Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:34 pm

vage: after anastasia hit him and i set my hand on him and using my sin eater powers i took some of enegry to knock him out
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Post by anonymouswriter Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:40 pm

Anastasia - Breathing heavily I leaned against the bar trying to calm myself. The world around me was spinning as I saw Vage knock him out using her powers. "Oh my god, oh my god," I muttered.
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Post by fallen rose Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:42 pm

vage:" its okay anastasia " i said holding up my hands to her showing her that i won't harm her
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Post by ~Silent~Archer~ Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:43 pm

(Can I join?)
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Post by fallen rose Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:44 pm

(sure join in)
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Post by anonymouswriter Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:44 pm

Anastasia - "I can't believe it," I say, "He came back, why did he come back?" I knew that I wasn't making any sense, but I couldn't control what was coming out of my mouth. I just prayed the Endless wouldn't come up and see me like this.

(I don't mind if you join, the more the merrier right?)
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Post by fallen rose Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:48 pm

sterling: noticing vage just knock out someone i had to check on her

vage:" he a trustless they are unpredictable"
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