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Post by anonymouswriter Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:25 am

may I join???
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Post by PavoLights Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:28 am

Andrea: I slowly start walking over despite her telling me to go fast. I reach for a piece of meat when a dog snaps at my arm. "Remember," I girl whispered when we woke up this morning. "Do not even think about touching their food when they're eating. They'll snap you in half before you even know what's going on!" Instead, I take out a bag that I'd gotten as well as gloves. I guess I have to get their...business now. I sigh. "So nasty," I murmur. But it's better than potentially dying.
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Post by PavoLights Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:30 am

Yep! Go ahead. Smile
Just start of with an orphan or two for now though. We aren't quite ready for the Outsiders yet.
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Post by anonymouswriter Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:48 am

Name: Anastasia Thorn
World(The Orphanage or The Outside?): Orphanage
Age: 15
Spieces if Outsider:
Appearence: The Outside - Page 3 SAB-showpage
Short Bio: She was left when she was thirteen, but ran so that she wouldn't have to go in an orphanage, she was caught a year ago.

Name: Derek Hanes
Age: 16
Species if Outsider:
Appearence: The Outside - Page 3 Lucastill
Short Bio: His dad killed his mother then was sent to prison, he has been here since he was 13
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Post by anonymouswriter Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:51 am

Anastasia - I sighed, another Saturday, another chore. I looked to see what I had, clean bathrooms!? Yuck. I made a face over at Derek, my best friend, and saw him just staring at me. I waved my hands in front of his face, "Excuse me? Are you dead?" I laughed.

Derek - I smiled at her, the love of my pitiful life, and laughed, "Not yet," I tell her, "What'd you get?" She showed me her paper that said bathroom cleaning, "ohhh..." I drag out, "I got sweeping."
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Post by PavoLights Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:55 am

Cool. Smile
It's chore day and Ms. Devou has a special guest coming. Most of the kids are younger, the oldest being fourteen, but two kids are in the recieving room cleaning while the other two are in the backyard taking care of her scary dogs. There's another who's still in the boy's dorm, but that person isn't on right now.

....And you already know this. Very Happy

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Post by PavoLights Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:04 am

Carter: "And, fin!" I take a bow when I'm done with the bookshelf and take a special bow to the portrait above the fireplace as though she were the queen. I turn around and see Derek standing there with his almost-girlfriend. The poor sap. "You!" I yell as a swing my duster in his direction. "You dishonored my family. Remember the year of the pig! That was the year you killed my father and that is the year you die!" I need to make chores entertaining some how. Why not an epic samurai fight? Most kids didn't even know what a samurai was...
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Post by PavoLights Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:07 am

Brb...
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Post by anonymouswriter Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:44 am

Derek - I laugh at Carter, "Now, Carter, are we really going to do this in front of Anastasia, when you beat me I will lose all my manliness!"
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Post by fallen rose Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:47 am

krissy: i got back to my work after i help andrea i need finish up my chores
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Post by PavoLights Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:48 am

Carter: "Such is the fate of those who dare to screw with Miturui Tohroh! Now face your destruct-" Footsteps catch my ear. I immediately go back to dusting the bookshelves, taking off the rag around my face to avoid them calling me a terrorist. I give Derek and Ana a look that says get ready. The door opens and instead of Ms.Devou, I see a strange, grey looking woman. I look at her akward movements as I move my duster back and forth.
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Post by PavoLights Sat Nov 20, 2010 12:28 pm

Andrea: I walk into the recieving room after finally finishing with the dogs. One of them bit me, on my leg and wouldn't let go until one of the other girls had to help me. I sit by the red head girl and pout. I hate this place.
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Post by fallen rose Sat Nov 20, 2010 12:31 pm

krissy:" are you okay ?" i ask noticing her leg got bitten
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Post by PavoLights Sat Nov 20, 2010 12:34 pm

Andrea: I look down at my leg. It's bleeding, kind of like a nose bleed. But not as much as Daddy bled, so I guess I'm alright. "Yea..." I say, wiping away the tears I'd shed when it first happened. "It's just a scratch."
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Post by fallen rose Sat Nov 20, 2010 12:36 pm

krissy:" okay by the way i'm krissy "
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Post by PavoLights Sat Nov 20, 2010 12:42 pm

Andrea: "I'm Andrea," I say in a small voice. I look up when I see a grey looking woman walking towards. I don't think she's a teacher; she looks top young.
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Post by fallen rose Sat Nov 20, 2010 12:43 pm

krissy: i look at the same grey looking woman that andrea was looking and i wonder who is she and why is she here
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Post by PavoLights Sat Nov 20, 2010 12:51 pm

Andrea: She stops when she looks at us and bows her head a little. "Hello, my name is Sandra Davis. What are your names?" I look at Krissy and then back at the lady. Was she a real person? She looked like a doll. She was pretty, but sad looking and damaged. A doll that had been left in it's box full of twisty ties and tape and gathered dust in a little girl's closet.

Carter: I crack open the door and stare at the woman. It's like something out of one of those Irish fairy tales my mom would tell me about. I raise am eyebrow as I stare at her funny looking nails and boring beige clothes.
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Post by fallen rose Sat Nov 20, 2010 12:54 pm

krissy;" i'm krissy sin" i said but i was shock by this woman she didn't seem real
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Post by PavoLights Sat Nov 20, 2010 1:02 pm

Andrea: "U-um, I'm Andrea," I murmur. Her smile seems painful, thin and stretched. She nods at us and whispers in a voice that's barely audible ", I am pleased to meet you. I trust that you enjoy your stay here at St.Claude's?" "Yes, very much!" I force out before the truth can come out. She looks Krissy over. "And you?"
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Post by fallen rose Sat Nov 20, 2010 1:08 pm

krissy: i try to tell the lie like andrea but i couldn't get myself said anything so i just nodd yes
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Post by PavoLights Sat Nov 20, 2010 2:32 pm

(I think we should wait until Inspired or anonymouswriter get back online. I have a plan, but I don't want too many people to miss out on it."
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Post by fallen rose Sat Nov 20, 2010 2:35 pm

(okay )
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Post by Guest Sat Nov 20, 2010 6:29 pm

(I is here Very Happy))

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Post by PavoLights Sat Nov 20, 2010 6:36 pm

Yea, but fallen rose isn't now. @.@
Did you read, or should I do an update?
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