The Summer that changed my life forever...

Brok: "There's not that much else left. I don't think the boys or Kent would like it if I showed you their rooms. Wait, we have a ping-pong table. Wanna see it?"

Dakota: "I know what a ping-pong table looks like, Brok, I think I'm okay." I laughed.

what causes a chat to be locked or blocked?

(Locked when it gets too long, I think.)

Brok: "But I want to play ping-pong with you!"

Dakota: "Nooo. I'm not good at games like that. Air hockey, remember that?"

Brok: I laughed. "Fine. You can play with Trey. He sucks. And I'll watch."

(did you get my edits?)

Dakota: I didn't want to play with Trey, I wanted to spend time with Brok. "Okay...where's Trey?"

(Yeah. I feel like Traysee is my Kendall, haha. I really don't like her myself sometimes.)

Brok: I whistled. "Trey!"

Trey: I'd finished washing up and was about to go to my room. "Yeah?"

Brok: "Play ping-pong with Dakota."

Trey: I frowned. "I don't really like ping-pong..."

(She's supposed to be that way...?)

Dakota: "Yeah, Trey doesn't really like ping-pong, so let's do something else," I said quickly.

(No! I mean...remember how frustrating Kendall was for you? That's what I think about Traysee. That, and most people only read chapter 1, so Shane got super developed, and Traysee didn't.)

Trey: "Do you guys still want me around?" I hoped they didn't do anything dumb.

Brok: I turned to Dakota. "Do you mind if he sticks around?"

(Yes, she was frustrating. ._.
And by the way, I wasn't trying to be a bitch with the edits. >.> I felt like it kind of came out that way.)

Dakota: My eyes widened as I thought I kind of knew why he wanted to stay around. "Uh...nope, it's not like..." I decided not to finish that sentence, they would get it. "Yeah, it's fine if Trey stays."

(No, it's fine! People would always tell me Traysee was hard to relate to and bitter. Even the HC people said that. But I never knew how to fix it. Now I think I have an idea )

Trey: I shoved my hands in my pockets.

Brok: "We could play Super Smash."

(oh, okay, great! ^-^ I really liked the idea that she dressed like an elementary schooler as a way to kind of...show her...dorkiness? Or something.)

Dakota: "Okay..." Awkwardnesssss with Trey.

(That's probably the one thing that will stay. I think I'm going to have her be nicer to Linda, though. She's very hard to portray x_x.)

Trey: I shrugged. "Sure," I said.

Brok: I grinned. "Let's do this!"

(LOL Trey *pokes*)

(yeah, she's a little hard on Linda. I can kinda see what you're trying to do with her, though. just sometimes she's a little too much...THAT. Lol, don't know the word for it)

Dakota: "Yay..." I said lamely, following Brok.

(Lol. It's not like they'd actually do anything o.o)

(She's a little too...ack. haha. Traysee. I want to slap her sometimes, seriously. Shane's lines come really easily now that I've spent so much time on him. Time for me to brush up on Traysee and Linda.)

Brok: "Which character do you like playing as?"

Trey: I chose Pikachu for mine.

Brok: "Hey! I was going to use him!"

Trey: "Too bad."

(I like Linda, she's so fan-girlish, it's funny. xD)

Dakota: "Umm...I dunno, you choose for me."

(I know, she's awesome. And she does end up with Paul, so you'll see her again xD)

Brok: "We can all be different colored Pikachus."

(Linda + Paul = cuuuuute

btw, I was creeping the Facebook chat and I saw you said you were going to prom.
did you go with that blonde guy?)

Dakota: "Alright."

(I know!!! lol that's a fun chat. No :/. I asked him to orchestra banquet and he said he wasn't sure if he wanted to go with someone or not x_x. I think he knows I like him now. He's ah-dorable, though...we spent today shooting water balloons in our friend's backyard for a physics project earlier with that pool thingy.)

Brok: "I call the blue one."

Trey: I picked the green one.

Brok: "Do you like red, Kota?"

(Aww do you think that was his way of saying no? D: YOU MUST END UP WITH HIM, ITS ALREADY DECIDED)

Dakota: "I don't really care, so sure." I picked the red one.

(lol. I dunno. He said "IDK!!!!" to going to banquet itself until the day money was due. So he might just be procrastinating. He's indecisive, lol.)

Brok: "Alright. Let's go!" I exclaimed, pressing start.

(lol xD BE OPTIMISTIC THEN)

Dakota: I rolled my eyes at how excited he was and focused on the game.

(I am maybe he'll ask me tomorrow before banquet xD)

Trey: I immediately attacked Brok.

Brok: I used my character to body slam his.

( hopefully)

Dakota: I ran my character away from them, and just watched.