C. D. - character development

"Accomplished sorcerer?! HA!!! DON'T MAKE ME LAUGH!!!" said Ezra.

((I knew you'd like that one, condog xD))

"You lie!" I told Dan, pointing at him accusatorily in the same manner as before. "Observe." I bent down and placed my hands flat on the floor. A magic circle flashed into existence, purple lines glowing and shimmering. A small projection of Dan appeared.
"Stella, calm down," he said, putting his hand on her arm, "she didn't mean any harm. I'm all science by the way; no magic."
I got up, and the projection and the circle vanished.
"Your words verbatim, wolf boy. Also, this is exactly what I mean by stuck-up!"

((I literally copied and pasted that, fixing for grammatical errors as well as perspective. But seriously, go back and you'll see it. Your words, man.

Also, Dan is in dire need of a good, hard smacking from the Sue-Hammer.))

condog wrote:(OMG A NARUTO REFERENCE YAY!)
Dan:
"I never said magic didn't exist dipwad, Im a werewolf aren't I? And you!" I say wheeling on (Insert Regret's Charrie's name here that I know but am too lazy to type but I typed this long thing anyway so Im a hypocrite deal with it!) "What are you anyway? And talking about equals no one on Earth can equal my strength, I am immortal I have the strength of a werewolf I have lightning abilites and apparently I am an accomplished sorcerer! I can speak words and what I want happens! FIRE!" I bark and flame erupts in front of us. "I love Stella but I could destroy her with a word!"

Stella:
I look at Andrew and say, "At least you don't always have a constant craving for human flesh. The thrill of killing someone and then eating their warm delicious flesh" I shudder realizing I am going over the edge with anger.

Dan:
"Um... Stella? You're scaring me" I say.

"Did you sink Atlantis?" asks Mirochai-Neptuna. "Do you crush ships with a single word? My HAIR has killed more people than you have."
There is a second of silence, then Mirochai turns to Leslie. "All things can die. And I don't think you want to test it."
((That's true. In her usual state, the tentacles of her hair tear ships apart. In her usual state, she can bench-press Poland.))

Dan:
"Ah, you did catch that. In fact my electric side is completely science but some wierd crap happens when I use it sometimes, maybe you can explain it, but anyway I am a sorcerer if not as accomplished as I said. I can only perform a few spells so far I am actually studying forbidden texts kept at Area 51. I wanted to see how well you listen, listening is a key part of being able to perform good magic. You have to hear the environment around you, you have to listen to how the enrgy of the world you are on reacts when you say the simplest spell, if the world reacts badly the results could be catastrophic!" I say, "So yes, I am science and sorcery, and a werewolf all rolled into one seriously confused guy. By the way I am still afraid one of these sides of me will destroy me, because under all of this I am just a regular human. I was born normal, well as normal as I could be with abusive parents. I met Peter and Stella in first grade, when I was in eighth grade my parents made me move with them to Los Angeles. There I joined a gang called The Wolves we were constantly at war with another gang called the Irons. Eventually our leader Ricky was killed right in front of me, he had left the gang to me so I was scared I might be next. I ran back to my apartment in a bad part of town. There I found my parents dead. I thought that the Irons had killed them but I later found out it was Peter. I ran from Los Angeles trying to make my way back to San Francisco on foot. I was picked up on the road and taken to Area 51 where I learned humans are a very advanced space faring race. They also gave me my lightning abilities and I became the super hero Strike. I had to fight an entire super villian group alone because the super hero team I used to belong to were half dead and I was the only one left. I was close to being burned to ash by Alexis, who Lucy ate, when Stella, Peter, and Lucy came and rescued me. I was taken back to Area 51 after I recovered and I was allowed to study the forbidden texts. No not like on a cell phone! I didn't know why but I soon found out, Peter, Stella, Lucy, and I were being sent to outer space to fight an alien race called the Varanidae that liked eating humans. And thats all I've got for you right now" I say shrugging. I then turn to Neptuna and say, "Yes, I have destroyed ships with a single word, Katastrepsi. That is Greek for destroy, apparently Greek being the old language it is is very powerful. I even used the wierd power I was telling Leslie about to destroy an entire fleet, I don't care if you hair is a god where you come from. I still hate killing"

Stella:
"Did you have to tell your entire life story?" I ask rolling my eyes

"Fleets. Tiny. Your species mean nothing to me."

Dan:
"I don't mean human fleets, I mean a fleet of Varanidae and Senetaur ships. I destroyed 500,000 ships with a word. It was easy. It maes you think how fragile life is, and how easily it is taken away"

"500,000? The oceans of this world are my playground. No fleet or creature could shake my hold."

Dan:
"Hmm, not even this?" I say and then I yell, "EXATMIZONTAI!" immediately all bodies of water on the planet evaporate, "I said I know few spells, but of the ones I'va mastered I can use them to great effect"
(Just FYI exatmizontai is Greek for evaporate)

Stella:
"Dan, put the water back, you know how much that can change a planet's ecosystem. He did the same thing to a Varanidae colony, the planet went into chaos and just died a few months later" I say.

Dan:
"Oh fine" I say then yell, "ENYDRO!"
(Enydro is Greek for Hydrate)

"You sorcery? I know things that you wouldn't dream of," Ezra laughed.

Dan:
I laugh and my hand slams into Ezra's face and he is binarized. "Hows that?" I ask.

(I just love binarizing Ezra, its fun)

"Pretty good. Now bring me back." said Ezra.

(Lol)

Dan:
"Maybe later" I say chuckling.

"Just bring me back."

Dan:
"Why? I find you less irritating this way. Oh, also I am the only one who can hear you talking right now" I say

"Thanks," Ezra said sarcasticly, "now I woukd like to be brought back."

Dan:
I roll my eyes, "Fine" I say he reappears.

"Thank you," Ezra sighed.

"Or I could do this," replies Mirochai. She snatches Dan's soul for a second, and his body crumples flat. It is still alive, but in a deep coma, as no mind now inhabits it. "But that's the easy way out."
She replaces his soul.
"I'd prefer to give you smallpox."

"Could you do that to someone like me?" asked Andrew.

"If I felt it was worth my while," says Mirochai in an offhand manner. A crayfish scuttles from her 'hair', and she snatches it suddenly, thrusting it into her mouth. "Want one?"

((With my pathological hatred of Mary-Sues, I am suspicious of Mirochai-Neptuna. However, as she is a goddess, I feel that I have not overstepped the mark with her powers. Your thoughts?))

(Nope, I guess. Liz actually casts a spell that goes awire and Ezra and Andrew switch states of being. If Andrew were to remain lke that Ezra would cease to exist.)

"I can't eat," said Andrew shaking his head.

"Your loss. They're best when they're still wriggling. For some reason I like you more than the rest of your disgusting species. I can actually tolerate your presence, so I'm going to do you a favour."
The tentacles on her head reach out and gather up sticks and other sundry rubbish, arranging it into the crude likeness of a human form. It's surprisingly accurate, but the features are blurred and barely formed.
"This will hurt a bit."
She moves her hand through Andrew, the claws catching in his ephemeral form, and moves him to the humanoid figure. She binds the soul in place.
"This body will wear out soon, but for now it is yours. You can step in and out any time you like."

(If she is a goddess I don't think your over stepping boundaries at all, a god/goddess can do anything)
Dan:
I pitch forward and vomit, "Jesus Christ!" I yell standing up, "So, now let me ask you about this power I have" I say after I calm down a bit. "It would be easier to show you but someone would have to fight me and make me really mad"

Stella:
"Dan, are you sure you want to show them? You could kill everyone here"

Dan:
"If she has any chance of telling me what it is its worth the risk"

"Do your 'transform into werewolf' bit again," says Mirochai-Neptuna. "Then I'll show you what i really look like."

Dan:
"Its not my werewolf form, besides like that I would try to kill you I can't control myself in that form yet" I say, "its something to do with my electrical abilities. Its happened once before, I got really mad and I was able to utterly destroy his existance, his soul, his body. Everything! I also knew that in that state I could do almost anything. It was, scary" I shudder.

(Just FYI I havent actually said this yet but Dan is a god and doesnt know it yet he was actually made a god by his teacher who is a Koleospteron and his teacher was also a god. So, I find convenient and ironic that Neptuna is a goddess. This chat could get interesting)