C. D. - character development

(And they're talking about the mafia? Interesting. )

Penny: I'd found the group again. "Hey, guys."

((Actually, Andrew and Aria are in the Upper World. We're going there shortly.))

Leslie
"'Hey guys?'" I asked her. "We're planning to go to Heaven, there's a huge army and a dragon just hanging around, and all you have to say is hey guys?"

(lol, is a mortal gonna be able to go up there?)

"You're selling people...kinda human tracking." said Andrew.

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"Look are we going or not?" asked Ezra.

Penny: "Going...?"

((Yeah, mortals can go. It's just more dangerous for them.))

Aria
"The word is 'trafficking,'" I corrected him. "And yes. That doesn't make us the mafia."

Leslie
"I'd like to say 'no,'" I told him, "but it seems that your girlfriend there can't be reasoned with. So I suppose we are." I looked around. "Any other mortals wanna take a trip to Heaven?" I asked with a smirk.

"She's not my...girlfriend...." mumbled Ezra.

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"SO WHAT?! It's still wrong!"

Penny: "Well, uh...yeah, I guess I'll come..."

Aria
"Do I care?" I asked him. "No. We're surviving. That's all that matters."

Leslie
"Agh!" I said. "I was hoping you wouldn't...bah, whatever!"

Penny: "Well...sorry. I'm curious."

"I'll go," said Evan.

"I will too!" added Cassie.

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Andrew sighed, "The only thing I don't get is how come you want me now if I was dead for ninety-nine years...why not ninety-nine years ago? Why couldn't you have done it before I met....nevermind."

Kiera:
I growl at the first and second ranks. After they fire without thinking I hurl myself in front of David and take their volleys of bullets in my back. It feels like I'm being hit with hundreds of darts from a dart board. (By the way trust me on this it hurts! I've dropped a dart on my foot it hit my capalary and it hurt like really bad) I black out from the pain.

David:
Stunned at Kiera's sacrifice I stare at her unconciouss body. I am shaking with fury. I draw my sword and hiss the spell that Ezra has taught me. The blade catches on fire. With the agility of an elf I run over Kiera's body and charge the ranks of Norlan, my blade trailing bright orange flames behind me as if the sword has a tail. I start to slash at the Norlans trying to kill any that I can out of blind fury.

Ezra facepalmed, at this rate they were never going to save Andrew...not that he cared.

Dan:
"Can I come?" I ask, "I want to help Andrew". I am scared out of my mind at the thought but I had to help Andrew. The reason I'm scared is because I am a Catholic, I go to chuch with Peter and Stella every Sunday. Being Catholic we hear about angels all the time, these almighty beings are only second to God in power and even being immortal I did not want to go toe to toe with one. Especially if they were more powerful than Aria and Leslie.

"SURE! WHY NOT?!" Ezra said, throwing his hands up in the air.

"What if you get angry?" asked Liz concerned.

Penny: "Are we going or not?"

"Sure...but what about-" started Liz, but Ezra cut her off.

"WHO'S GOING AND WHO'S STAYING?!" he bellowed.

Penny: "I'm coming!" I snapped, starting to get annoyed that we were still stuck here.

"Anybody else?" Ezra called, grabbing the book.

"We'll go." said Evan and Cassie.

Leslie
"Oh, why not have everybody go?!" I demanded, throwing my hands up in the air in frustration. "And what about you, Shouty McAirship?!" I asked the Norlan guy. But he looked kinda preoccupied.

Aria
"Do you know how many ghosts there are in the Middle World?" I asked. "I'll tell you, there are a lot. Plus, the scent of angel magic hanging around your friends blocked out the scent of your mortal soul...ness. Besides which, we're more concerned with fighting demons than gathering mortal ghosts. Any ghosts we can pick up are just a side bonus. We'll be getting the demon too, though, I'm sure."

Dan:
"Who me?" I say laughing. "I probably won't be able to be mad because I'll be terrified that I may not be able to move after we get there". I laugh half heartedly, "But, I'm still going because I want to help Andrew"

Stella:
I step forward and say, "I'm going too". I smile at Dan and he smiles back, I thought he would tell me not to go but now I can tell he's relieved I'm going.

Lucy:
"I'm going too" I say quietly. I look away from Dan and Stella who are smiling encouragingly at me. I look over at Peter and say, "Peter?"

Peter:
"Um... I think I'll chill out down here" I say backing up a little bit. Lucy glares, Stella growls, and even though he's over ten feet away Dan binarizes and rebinarizes behind me and smacks me in the back of my head. "OW!" I say, "WHAT?"
He says, "If Lucy is going, you're going!"
"I was just joking, of course I'm going I wouldn't let Lucy go and be left to such a horible fate as to be looked after by you too!"

"I'll be going," replies Ventrix, parrying David's swings and thrusts with practiced ease. "But only to show you what a trained and disciplined force can do."

(David wasn't going after Ventrix, he was trying to kill the men who shot Kiera)

((Crap. Well, uh, Ventrix ordered it, so he would be a natural target. Also, he would step in to defend his men, so let's assume that's what happened.))

(Alright)
David:
Enraged that he is ignoring me and not even fighting for real I attack with renewed fury. My fiery blade cutting through the air the temperature rising.