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Post by Guest Tue Nov 09, 2010 11:30 pm

(Hah, that does sound scary.)

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Post by anonymouswriter Wed Nov 10, 2010 6:36 am

Anastasia - I felt average in this room, like I wasn't needed as they discussed things. I studied the guy's tense reaction as they got closer and closer to finding something important out. "You're hiding something," I whispered to him.

Derek - "So what if I am," he said in a charming tone, one I didn't fall for..
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Post by natashangel Thu Nov 11, 2010 8:36 pm

Laila- "Do we know anything about this person? Does he have a history of drugs, violence?"
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Post by Guest Thu Nov 11, 2010 8:38 pm

Hayden: "If you mean the victim," I emphasized the word, because I hated when people didn't use the right terms. "We don't know much about him. But if he had that kind of history, and it was essential to his murder, they probably would have figured it out by now."

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Post by natashangel Thu Nov 11, 2010 8:56 pm

Laila- I nod, then go over to the victim. "Take your index,and middle finger and jab the fingers into the larnyx. Using enough force, this will cause the victim to suffocate." I mumble under my breathe. I look for any sign of suffocation.
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Post by anonymouswriter Fri Nov 12, 2010 7:11 am

Anastasia - I looked at the victim. I wondered if he had a family, kids, a loving wife. I wondered if he was on his way to see them when he was killed. I wondered what he did to deserve it. I whispered to Derek, "Nobody deserves that, you know, nobody," I told him hoping that he would feel guilty, I had a feeling he had something to do with this murder.

Derek - "You don't really believe that," I told her back. She was going to be a challenge, they all were. I would have to deal with them, but I might just take a captive or two, to have some fun with. I smile harshly.
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Post by natashangel Fri Nov 12, 2010 6:00 pm

Laila- "And what do you believe," I say turning to him.
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Post by anonymouswriter Sat Nov 13, 2010 3:27 pm

Derek - "I believe that certain people deserve to die, certain people need to be taught lessons in life," I say.

Anastasia - I gasp at him, that was horrible.
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Post by Guest Sat Nov 13, 2010 3:29 pm

Hayden: I spun on my heel to face the boy, prepared to say something more-than-rude to him. But I held my tongue. This just may be the perfect opportunity to pry. "Interesting, care to explain?"

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Post by natashangel Sat Nov 13, 2010 3:39 pm

Laila- This ought to be interesting. I do agree to a certain extent. Serial murders ,for instance, maybe shouldnt live after all the lives they had taken. Yet I wasnt to sure if that's what this guy was taking about.
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Post by anonymouswriter Sat Nov 13, 2010 3:42 pm

Derek - I gave her a harsh grin, "We don't know this person's life. We don't know if he was a drug dealer or a murderer himself. Maybe he deserved to die. Maybe it was best for everyone for him to just disappear."

Anastasia - "I don't care if he killed people, if in fact he did, NOBODY deserves to die alone," I yelled at him thinking of my mom. Thinking of the man who got away with my mother's murder, with her rape.
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Post by Guest Sat Nov 13, 2010 3:55 pm

Hayden: "Or maybe he wasn't, and maybe it wasn't. Maybe he had a family, kids, a great life. Maybe he didn't have any hidden motives or secrets. Is it fair to say that it's just as likely he led a bad life as a good one?" I cocked my head to the side, always the peacemaker in situations like this. Especially at school.

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Post by anonymouswriter Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:02 pm

Anastasia - "What if he had a daughter or a son?" I said sadly, "What if they are crying right now as we speak. What if the daughter is sitting locked up in her room contemplating suicide? What if there is a ten paged note in her hand explaining all the reasons why? What if she has a knife and a gun under her pillow and a rope hanging from the ceiling. What if she will never have a normal life now, all because one person took another persons life." I ranted, now speaking from experience.
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Post by Guest Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:04 pm

Hayden: "There are two sides to every story," I nodded at the two of them, then resumed my examination and analyzation of the room. There was always some piece of evidence, small as it may be, that you overlooked. No matter how many times you looked over a case, you were always at risk of missing something.

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Post by anonymouswriter Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:07 pm

Derek - "Well, I can guess YOUR story," I gave the girl a once over.

Anastasia - "And I can tell that you're were a part of this," I snarled.

Derek - "Can you now? You have no evidence of that, so shut your pretty little mouth," I growled
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Post by Guest Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:11 pm

Hayden:"It looks as though you have an admirer," I told the girl, having to consciously keep from rolling my eyes. This was no setting for flirting. I then addressed both of them. "This isn't about our stories, this is about the victim's."

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Post by anonymouswriter Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:13 pm

Anastasia - I nodded. She was completely right. I walked around the room trying to find something, anything, that could help.
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Post by Guest Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:21 pm

Hayden: That guy ((Derek)) was just standing there, watching all of us. "Shouldn't you be working, too?" I said somewhat coldly.

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Post by anonymouswriter Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:25 pm

Derek - "I guess," I said. I walked around the room, avoiding any spot that could have possible evidence.
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Post by Guest Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:34 pm

Hayden: I noticed the odd pattern in which the guy walked, and I asked skeptically "What are you avoiding?"

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Post by anonymouswriter Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:26 pm

Derek - "Who said I was avoiding anything?" I asked.
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Post by Guest Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:28 pm

Hayden: "No one, it was implied. You've been weaving around, in a consistent way. You're avoiding certain spots again and again. And you're examining other spots, but coming up with nothing. So what is it that you're avoiding in those certain spots? There is a reason behind every action."

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Post by anonymouswriter Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:48 pm

Derek - "I'm going to the spots I think there could be something," I lie.
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Post by Guest Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:49 pm

Hayden: "Hm, really? Because one would think you'd realized there was nothing there after returning to those same areas at least four times." There was an undertone of accusation in my voice. But for what?

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Post by anonymouswriter Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:53 pm

Derek - "I'm not perfect, I could always have missed something," I say.
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