broken hearts

Thanks
Kewl pic BTW x)

Character form:

Name: Fallon
Gender: Female
Age: 16 1/2
Species: Breatheless
Title:
Personality: A bit flirty, snappy at times, usually in a good mood
Looks: Bright purple blue eyes, long caremal hair that curls at the end
Bio: Has grown up doing shows for money, parents died at a young age

(good and because one of my character is kind of stuck hanging out with his girlfriend i will be using my other characters rose and valiantly to chat with you )

valianlty: because rose is bored out of her mind i decide to take her to one of the bars to hang out and try to get drinks even if we are not 21

Fallon: I'm on the bright blue stage, one leg high in the air ad arms straight out at my sides, slowly twirling on my toes. The dance starts off slow, and the piano becomes a poppy beat. I know this routine, I've done it for all my life, yet I still like it.
My blonde hair is swept up into a bun, a few strands loose, and I'm in a tight white ballerina dress with matching tights and black Madeline dress shoes.
I loom around at the bar from the stage as I dance.

rose: i turn to face the stage so i could watch the dancer i alway like watching dances

valiantly: i just kept my focus on my drink

Who are you're charries?

Name: rose heart
Gender:female
Age:16
Species:weredragon
Title:sleepless
Personality: sweet, childish
Looks: lond red hair, golden eyes, tall
Bio: she living in abandon build with the other streets kids of the city

Name: valiantly lost
Gender:female
Age:17
Species:sineater ( fairy that suck all the painful emotion away)
Title: skinless
Personality: sweet, caring,
Looks: blond hair, blue eyes, tall, pale
Bio: she refuse to take orders and when ever she can she helps other people with their pain

Name: sterling dark
Gender:male
Age:17
Species: dark angel
Title: ex-endless
Personality: protective, kind
Looks: black emo looking hair, sliver eyes
Bio: he was endless the ruler of the town at least until he was kill brough back by his girlfriend shannon


these are my charater info

Very cool!
So got anything in mind yo happen?

not really it just what ever comes to mind happens

Fallon: I end the dance and take a bow. After I get offstage I pull the elastic from my hair and shake it loose, approaching a girl saw watching me.
"Hey, I'm Fallon," I say smiling, extending a hand.

Rose:" nice to meet you I'm rose I love your dancing"

(Hm...this is getting sort of repetitive, but I'm not sure how to change it up a little bit. Any thoughts?)

Shannon: I kissed Sterling back as deeply, not thinking about anything else.

Sterling: I pulled away with a worried look on my face

( I don't have any ideas so I making this up as I go so right I think it's time for so trouble)

Shannon: I was immediately nervous when I saw his expression. "What's wrong, Sterling?"

Sterling:" not sure but something is wrong "

Shannon: I blinked, and sat up as I contemplated what he said, "You don't know what's wrong...but do you know maybe where it's happening?"

Sterling:I nodded " it's at the abandon build"

Shannon: I sighed with a half-grimace before I quickly got up, and left the apartment, assuming Sterling would follow right behind me.

Sterling: I follow Shannon out of the apartment and headed to the abandon building

Shannon: I walked faster than normal, but I didn't panic since I didn't even know what was going on yet.

Sterling: I walk faster as I got closer to the building once close enough I saw flames

Shannon: Now I ran, and I glanced at Sterling before I went into the burning building to see if anyone was still inside. I covered my mouth and nose with my sleeve, my eyes watering from the heat and smoke.

Sterling: I ran in after Shannon to help her

Shannon: I shouted loudly after I realized Sterling came in also, "Is anyone in here?" I started to look around hastily, coughing a little.

Sterling:" I don't see anyone Shannon" I shouted back I hope everyone was okay as I start to cough